Keep It With Your Heart Poem by Unwritten Soul

Keep It With Your Heart

Rating: 4.5


Stepping on the stairs
Chasing dream above
Somehow by just look at it
Never it scares us

One More step on the stair
Then take two and three
Till one day we'll be there
We will, we'll be there

Standing at the highest place
Now we can see all pains below
Somehow by just look at it
It may scare us

Just one careless step to slip
Then we at the bottom again
Scared to restart like the first time
A slip will send us there

So as you climb
Leave arrogant with your footsteps behind
I heard good heart will bring you wings
Will fly you when you slip

Because as long as your heart has faith
Even when you fall
God will save you
God will save you
...if your heart has faith

Keep one with you

Monday, April 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,faith,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In limited time i tried to write a poem, what comes to me just another poem inspired of life journey, it can be anyone...we all worry about uncertainty future, or regret the past and dislike the pain...so when i look at certain people i do feel touched, some are humble even they are successful but never arrogant... and because of the intention and how sincere we do things in life, we may hurt but we still have the bless. We may back to the basic but we know to reclaim what we lost because good helping hands will always have other hands to keep it stand again. Being successful is not to have what we want, being successful is about to contribute for people around. For life is never living alone, but togetherness we are life. Love and care for All
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 30 April 2018

Hi Soul. Poem shows contentment and calmness of heart. We will, we'll be there. very positive message in beautiful lines. best wishes friend

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Rajnish Manga 03 May 2018

Thanks for sharing this noble poem with a sublime message for all. The Poet's Notes further elaborate- life should not be self satisfying but beyond that. You have rightly said: For life is never living alone, but togetherness we are life. Love and care for All

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Mj Lemon 03 May 2018

A great reminder that when we ascend, those supports we leave behind may evaporate. How fleeting those supports may be! A magnificent and thought provoking work, Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 May 2018

Standing at the highest place Now we can see all pains below..... ...... ........... .......... Because as long as your heart has faith Even when you fall God will save you God will save you ...if your heart has faith... ........ ......being successful is about to contribute for people around.......touching and impressive presentation. The essence of the poem you mentioned here is on above as quoted. We must live in togetherness. God is there. Beautiful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 February 2020

Just one careless step to slip Then we at the bottom again Scared to restart like the first time A slip will send us there A beautiful stanza of a thoughtful poem. We make a lot of efforts to climb but just a slip brings back us on the earth.

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Dev Anand 29 July 2018

Because as long as your heart has faith Even when you fall God will save you God will save you ...if your heart has faith...For life is never living alone, but togetherness we are life. Love and care for All Great and meaningful idea of faith relying on God. thank u dear poetess..

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Dev Anand 26 July 2018

Just one careless step to slip Then we at the bottom again Scared to restart like the first time A slip will send us there..yes it is togetherness that matters...... thank u for the explanation.. fine poem. dev

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Khairul Ahsan 22 May 2018

We live, not for ourselves, but for others too. Successful is he who not only walks ahead himself, but takes others along too! Without humility and empathy, this is not possible. Nice thoughts, thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'.

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Rus Mer 07 May 2018

being successful is about to contribute for people around. For life is never living alone, but togetherness we are life. Love and care for All....i'll keep faith like this...

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