Laying Next To Your Grave Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Sweet sweet sweet deep but sad at peak...Silent your voice but your soul voice loud..and it effective to our feelings here...i know how u feel it's tough! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

very well written...i can relate to this as i have undergone the experience

absolutely entrancing.......very inspiring to me! ! ! thanks

I can so relate to this. Just last week I laid by my sisters grave hoping to reconnect. Thank you for sharing this, you're a very talented writer.

Death Will I keep thinking and being after I die Or think nothing after my last feeble sigh? Please just read my poems and smile at the sky After my brains are no more mine and my mind free to fly. Will I keep feeling and being after I die Or feel nothing after that last feeble light? Please just play my music during those special nights After my fingers are no more and my songs still hold you tight. - from GOD BLESS NOT ONLY AMERICA

Your broken heart cries, screams with loss and pain but it's not the shards of your heart that remain Your Love that you have- not had is as stong as ever, it's still th e same- never chainged His spirit picks up the pieces- and you are suddenly whole again. Silentpoet Grl, your words are proof to the pudding... that your emotions, your passions, your Love is alive and well. another Great Piece, Great Ink! ! ! ; -) -kelly.

The lost of a love once loved is the greatest miseries of the heart. Tears shed, the chest seems a baloon overwhelmed with real pains and emotions ready to explose. I love the last lines: 'i loved you' quietly escapes as i pull my shaking hand away tears well up, burning my eyes spilling over, pouring like rain. broken shards of my heart falling next to your grave they remain. THIS FINAL ADIEU is the most touching part of this poem. Silentpoet Girl, you describe human's miseries as perfectly as it should be....Thank you for sharing and continue to write please......

A death of a love once loved is the greatest miseries of the heart. Tears shed, the chest is overwhelmed by emotions...In this instance, no words come out....but then...'i loved you' quietly escapes... tears well up, burning my eyes spilling over, pouring like rain. broken shards of my heart falling next to your grave they remain. The last 4 lines of this poem, summed up, the sadness of the last adieu! Silent Poet Grl, thanks a lot for this show of a heart's destiny paintend in words like the famous Mona Lisa....I love this most....

Absolutely a gorgerous poem that i truely adore.... love, that unique love outlasts death forever :) wonderful poem, touched my heart ~Bella

Wow, simply beautiful, absolutely amazing. You are a wonderful poet and this poem definitely expressed that. burning my eyes spilling over, pouring like rain. broken shards of my heart falling next to your grave they remain. My favorite lines right here, the poem ended absolutely amazingly, this is definitely a 10, no wait, I'll give you a 20! ! =D Wow, beautiful poem, keep on writing, you see, they only get better and better and better! ! =D