Let Me Flow Poem by Valsa George

Let Me Flow

Rating: 5.0


For ages, I have been a stagnant lagoon
Plough out a canal for me
Let me flow, let some water
Seep down to the parched earth
Making the arid lands wet
May be I can thrill over the sprout of new life
And dance with the swaying leaves

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rubab Atwal 08 January 2014

a beautiful poem with an extraordinary message...loved reading it..

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Dinesan Madathil 08 January 2014

A stagnant lagoon desiring to wet the parched landscape is analogous to a man with material wealth aspiring to spend what is in excess by him for philanthropy and charity... This lagoon flowing across in the form of a river has a better entity. Madam, do you Know the Chinese were once reported to have arrested the course of a a rogue river and converted her into a big lagoon? Value of anything lies in its utility and similarly a filthy rich man needs to be humanised. to serve others. A fine write Madam Valsa..

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Valsa George 08 January 2014

Thank you Dinesh, for carrying my poem to higher dimensions than I imagined! Beautiful interpretation! !

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Kanav Justa 08 January 2014

like a barren land needs water to bloom, , we too need love in our lives to dance with the swaying leaves, , extraordinary write, , ,

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Kavya . 09 January 2014

lifes moments are subject to change, sometimes even beyond our control, a man wrapped up in himself makes a v small bundle, so its better to flow and dance and rejoice every moment.........a gud write Mam

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2018

May be I can thrill over the sprout of new life And dance with the swaying leaves.......nice poetic expresion. A beautiful poem based on philosophy has been astutely delineated.

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Loke Kok Yee 08 November 2015

only by interacting can we contribute to the richness of life thanks Valsa

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 November 2014

Oh! this is very inspiring indeed scripted with loving words laden with dews of emotions......Valsa.....amazing write .......10/10

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Rubab Atwal 18 January 2014

beautiful write, very encouraging..enjoyed it

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Patricia Grantham 16 January 2014

Ah yes! we all can use a shot of new birth. Especially emotionally and spiritually. When life has been stagnated for awhile it needs to be refreshed with newness. Then there will be new growth and room for improvement. Great encouragement Valsa! .

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