Shahzia Batool

Bronze Star - 2,259 Points (Pakistan)

Let's See The Sun Descending! - Poem by Shahzia Batool

Come with me
on the edge of life!
Come let's do something new and think,
and unfurl the brave new world;

hand over ourselves to odd and clumsy thought-strain
then let's see what happens? and where? and how?
where does come the night-fall from?
let's go and see!

let's turn the side of the globe of the moon...
let's solve the mystery of the rainbow palette,
on skies and sands alike, , ,
that keeps us in all amazement!

where is the dale of deep sleep you know?
where dwell the slumbers sweet?
where do the dreams of joys come from?
let's go and touch those abstract dreams...
let's go and see the moonlit night
covering tall trees

let's go and see the skies in spring
let's go and see the sun descending
from the other side of the world!
come with me!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Ghair mumkin nhi duniya mein koi kaam Batool
Jo kisi se nhi hota hay woh kr jaana hay! ! !

Comments about Let's See The Sun Descending! by Shahzia Batool

  • Valsa George (7/28/2013 1:54:00 AM)


    The mysteries of life are engrossing, also baffling! Men through ages have been in an eternal quest to unravel the riddles of life and existence! Let us join this train of explorers travelling to realms far! A very absorbing write! (Report) Reply

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  • (5/16/2013 2:33:00 PM)


    Really great poem. some great lines, lets go and touch those abstract dreams Fantastic line. (Report) Reply

  • Osama Waqar (8/19/2012 8:23:00 AM)


    ahh!
    u have made me remember the lines......
    A poet could not but be gay
    In such a jocund company
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  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (6/23/2012 10:16:00 AM)


    Life is like this exactly. We never know where we will be in the next minute. Life is a dream. If you dream of beauty, harmony, kindness, you get it. Just dream on lovely places and you will find the way to get there. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (6/8/2012 5:15:00 AM)


    where is the dale of deep sleep you know?
    where dwell the slumbers sweet?
    where do the dreams of joys come from?
    I like these lines...and have to find my answers.....
    An excellent poem! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++
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  • (6/4/2012 8:32:00 PM)


    A beautigul poem, rich in imagery, opening so many challenges in so many questions...'let's go and see the sun descending' is such a wonderful thought. TFS. Bless you. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (6/2/2012 7:36:00 AM)


    Yeah come on join us to watching the sun descending, and wait for moon ascending :) ..i like it!
    we will try many things for new life to think Shahzia...if possible
    we will wrap stars around the globe, belt with rainbows
    till the colors and shine drawn and immersed in the sea
    we gonna see bright shines earth and colorful land
    beautiful as what we dream isnt Shahzia? hahaha
    Keep dreaming but we must put reality as our basement :)
    Keep on writing and inspire us_Unwritten Soul
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  • (5/30/2012 11:20:00 AM)


    But before we depart on this fairy journey let us once peep with what blessing is this ink blessed and thank it for giving us a dropp of it which our little grasp cannot hold all. Poetry is an all in all pic of the poets thoughts, i wonder with what ease you think. Regards :) (Report) Reply

  • (5/30/2012 5:45:00 AM)


    yes, i'm ready!
    this is a fairy tale in verse, dear lady!
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  • (5/29/2012 3:46:00 PM)


    Chances to discover. Endless opportunities, just for the taking. The sky is the limit. A really encouraging poem. (Report) Reply

  • Shihabudheen K J (5/29/2012 6:19:00 AM)


    This poem stands like an invitation letter that has no boundaries, but promising horizons of hopes, love and adventure.if people under different skies can be brought under one lovelit umbrella, it would be the solution for all wars arisen out of caste n religion.more properly saying: god created human, human made religions and finally humans along with religion started wars. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (5/27/2012 11:40:00 PM)


    The natural setting presenting the vibrant state of mind, the clarion call for exploring the new horizon of love all cast a spell.Indeed a superb job! (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (5/25/2012 4:31:00 PM)


    daring amazing and absolutely demonic in feral love....
    Shakespearean old world charm......
    what metaphor.....the lines seem to just rise up on their own.... dance in trance...alive throbbing vivacious.
    a celebration of love..... from cupid his choice arrow

    congrats dear poet.
    you have done a marvel here

    cheers
    :)
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  • Valerie Dohren (5/24/2012 3:05:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem with great imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (5/24/2012 7:03:00 AM)


    ''where is the dale of deep sleep you know?
    where dwell the slumbers sweet? ''

    ''dale of deep sleep '' ''dwell the slumbers sweet'' all these are excellent phrases, this is the curiosity of heart to know the unknown, by putting the question you enhanced the beauty of sleep and slumbers.....an excellent poem, i love it.
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  • Captain Cur (5/23/2012 9:53:00 AM)


    Powerful, touching uplifting poem. The beauty in the seen and unseen worlds. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (5/23/2012 4:16:00 AM)


    There is one bengali song - at the dusk the tired birds are returning to their nests as if they have forgotten their path. the descending sun is so beautiful that can be imagined like the angel coming down on earth. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 20, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 19, 2013


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