Let's Talk About You Poem by Unwritten Soul

Let's Talk About You

Rating: 5.0


Fish cant fly,
Birds cant swim,
Trees dont even walk.
There is an equilibrium, a balance in life.

Who you are? ,
What limits u? ,
It's okay, find your ability.
Your identity

If u were a bird, fly to the stars,
If u were a fish, dive deeper than light could do,
If you stand as a tree, your branches are free,
West to east, north to south

Let's talk about you
You are you...
You know what inside you
Remember and believe
To the stars or to other hearts
You be you

Monday, November 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,life,motivation,reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this not as a poem, as one who doesnt know about poetry, i'll just be honest here...Originally they are sentences as one thought to encourage ourselves to not look others and forget self. There is space for everything to embrace ourselves. I wrote it this for friends, but i just put it here, who knows someone need to get reminded that each of us are beautiful, but need to find it in deeper self.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 November 2020

Wow this is one of your best poems, so wonderfully said! ! It inspires to use our potential however we have been made. Kudos! ! Plz pleez do read my newest poem titled, babies cry anywhere "

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Hi Zaynab, i forget to prompt u a reply, thanks and i did read and comment your beautiful work too

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Susan Williams 19 February 2021

If u were a bird, fly to the stars, If u were a fish, dive deeper than light could do, If you stand as a tree, your branches are free-----returned to read again---there is such joy and innocence in this lovely poem! '

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Susan Williams 17 January 2021

I give this 5 stars because I cannot give it more! I am going to favorite it as well---cuz this poem is so well constructed and written and it whispers to me!

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Susan Williams 17 January 2021

I love what you wrote and how you wrote it

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Varsha M 25 December 2020

Yes these words are true and even your notes. Finding our strengths builds us to tackle well and discovering weaknesses reflects a clear guidelines to rethink and plan well to advance in a different direction. Very inspiring. Thank-you so much.

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Muhammad Ali 07 December 2020

A nice and lovely poem. And what it is missing, added in poet's note. That is, it is a poem for you, being a friend of someone. For everyone, it is a poem for me, for every-me.

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

That so sweet of you, thanks my friend

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