Unwritten Soul


Light In The Chamber - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Light in the chamber
Glass, you keep it inside
Not as fortress from letting it brighten the dark
But your transparency magnify its power to cross the night

So do my love i carry in me
Here my beloved friends, my remedy
You magnify my love across the world
Signifying peace is here as our hands hold

If I am the light
You are the magnifying chamber
My lovers..

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship, life


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Light in a chamber is a tribute to all my friends here and along my lifetime. It is about my observation that lamp need glass to bring more power in lighting not to hold light to stay inside..the concave shape of bulb will scatter light better, so my true friends here...you are magnifying true me. As this is written to tribute for you, on my birthday..i want to wish you. Thanks for always supporting me..love you all across what boundaries divide us no matter religion, race, nationality, skin colour, opinion, language...your heart are the glass that protect candle from gone by the wind, magnify even more

here i specifically want to thank to friends here:
I tried to compile whole name from i started writing here until now
it may takes time, no preferences to each other, i love all of you..
i will updated it time by time, so if you cant find yours here...i
will do later..i have to trace back all my great 'hearties' here since 2010!

Adam reed (my first reader) , Ahmad Khaled, Whispering Rose, Vipin Poothorans, Terrence George Craddock, Hans VR, Saadat Tahir, Sally plumb plumb, Sally Walterean, Rekha Mandagere, Tom billsborough, Christopher Tye, Ellias, Mohammed maleki, Mohammad Ali, Susan Williams, Songfromsea, M.J. Lemon, Syed Aabid, Rohit Sharma, Shadow Girl, mr giddling) , Kevin Carney, Negar, Negin, Sunprincess, Richard Wlodarski, Frank Davis Sr, Wabi Sabi, Joshua Guillory, Valeri Dohren, S.Zaynub Kamoonpuri, Adilson Pinto, Jazib kamalvi, Rebecca Navarre, Hazel Durham, Genova maa, Saadat Tahir, Simone Inez Hariman, payal, Michael Mcfarland, Farzad, Cheryl Tutaan, Dr tony, Geetha jayakumar, Fabrizio, Sekharan pookat, Hosein Az, Hosein Bahr, Nader Baheri, Annete Aikin, Muhizatul Reza, Mihaela Pirjol, E.K.L, Robbert Murray Smith, Diane hine, Jr Cuyam, Kumarmani Mahakul, Mohammed Asim Nehal, Vishal Sharma, Sweta, Xelam kan, Farah Illyas, kamellokenol, ramesh rai, heather wilkin, Howard, Neela Nath, Paul Brookes, Erica Morgan, Danny Draper, Elena Sandu, jenie Franksay, suvi Sharma, Dinesh Nair, rain, kee Thampi, Shazia batool, David wood, Yasmin Khan, Ambrosia, Robert Wynn, Siyabonga A Nxumalo, Ace of Belack heart, captain cur, wahab abdul, terry oleary, Jahan zeb, Eldritch Mungo, Kanav justa, Kevin patrick, Chandra Thiagarajan, RK dass, Scotty Dog, Jinal Oswal, Lyn paul, Mirna Morgan, Guess who, abdallah, Colin Bradley, Subodh pandey, Spiritual seeker, Nassire Ghadire, Ketan Hukare, Valsa george, Ruby Honeytip, Luscious larry, Tony Karas, Lasoaphia Quxazs, Midnight voice, Kelvin Owasu, Kelly seale, Saeed jan, Ken E hall, Allemagne Ro? mann, hamid negah, sina farajzadeh, Ekaterina, Aditi Khandelawal, Sam S slait, Nurain Ali-balogun kaila george, Kasia Fedyk, Elena Sandu, Nimal Dununhingga, Dave walker, Eric cockrell, Sharad Juneja, Harindhar reddy, Willie walker, Omar jabak, Cosmic dreamer, Anita trivedi, Bernard snyder, Crimson love, Hosny Soliman, Pranab Chakraborty, Menime Soul'd' Ugliloner, muhammad muzammil, Stefanie Fontker, Romeo Della valle, Miroslava Odalovic, gordon, naida supnet, Aranthabailu Ummar, Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK, Eyan desir, Denise Bekker, kieran, kari alexander, mehta Hsamukh, Roshan roy....to be added..

Comments about Light In The Chamber by Unwritten Soul

  • Sekharan Pookkat (11/7/2017 10:01:00 AM)

    great lover of words
    magnifies soul
    as a token of birthday gift
    to one and all who read the poems- my ten###
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  • Fabrizio Frosini (10/17/2017 6:24:00 AM)

    thank you so much, dear Soul!
    Cheers
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  • (8/23/2017 12:39:00 AM)

    Soul, there is a tradition in various parts of the world in which the birthday person doesn't receive gifts, but rather, gives them to his/her friends. I see that you are part of that tradition. In addition to your friendship, you have given us these two gifts. Firstly, this beautiful heart-felt poem which speaks multitudes. And secondly, acknowledgement of our friendships. I am honoured and humbled to be included in this circle of poets who are so gifted and compassionate. May the circle never be broken! And may we all continue to share our poems with each other and provide support and encouragement. May you forever remain blessed, Soul. You are truly one of a kind! (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(8/23/2017 7:09:00 AM)

    Here there is no tradition like dear, at least so far as i observed... it just i think birthday is a anniversary of we having first day in this life, this dimension...so supposedly we should be thankful to God, parents who raised us and whoever make us stronger person and make our life so beautiful...when i am thinking of that, i feel that i should give express my thankful and giving my heart out to each person that comes along to my life journey and polished me to be better day by day...And when i wrote down i might missed someone but i dont mean it, sorry for i cant put it here...But to my greatest companion now and past, thanks for everything...your name all written on my heart's wall... :) Thanks Richard for being my good friend :)

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  • Adilson Pinto (8/6/2017 2:27:00 PM)

    You are really deeply, friend of all of us! ! ! You are the light we have here dear! Your heart is immense and beautiful! Thank you dear poet for your existence! (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(8/7/2017 7:24:00 AM)

    Everybody is a light and we are just amplifying each other light so what we can get is brightness! thank you dear for your words, and thank you also for be part of my life as friend that i never see but keep giving me strong hugs from far :) i do appreciate all of you. God knows!

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  • Jazib Kamalvi (7/26/2017 3:53:00 AM)

    What a nice energy enhancing poem. The conservation law has been left far behind. Thank you very much, (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(7/26/2017 5:46:00 AM)

    Thank your for your beautiful comment dear Jazib... :)

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  • Hans Vr (7/23/2017 7:54:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem, Soul.
    A wonderful friendship to celebrate. While reading through the names, it brought back so many memories to friendships we enjoyed throughout the years. Some of the friendships here on this site, I have experienced as soul-friends, more sometimes than my friends in my daily life. So true, Soul, the light gets magnified, it works both ways. Thanks my friend.
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    Unwritten Soul(7/24/2017 5:33:00 AM)

    Thank you dear Hans,
    I always treasure these friendships of mine...I dont know them personally, i dont need to interupt all things in their life, enough for me to feel the prestine of their souls, how our heart bridged by honesty, trust and kindness..i wont ask for other things, indeed i agree with you..i feel many friends here are more soul-linked to myself that some of my friend i've met in my life... because you all know my heart, the expression of my soul, in depth than just a hello and bye...and to have all of your beautiful minds here really healing, it lift my spirit when i am down, it cure my weakness when i need a strength, and because of that Thanks for magnifying my strength by your kind personality, positive poems and beautiful minds, what a lovely group of friends i have here...neverthesless i have lost some in time, but i owe them for in my life journey...Thanks All

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  • Rebecca Navarre (7/22/2017 11:37:00 PM)

    What A Strong Bright Shinning Soul/Light! ! ! ! ! In This Breathtakingly
    Beautifully Written Poem! ! ! ! ! Such Beautiful Heart Shown! ! ! ! ! And Ya! ! ! ! !
    Happy Birthday! ! ! ! ! Hope It Was Very Special! ! ! ! ! May All Your Wishes/
    Dreams Come True! ! ! ! ! Hope You Treated Your Self... To Something
    Special Just For You! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles....Thank You So Much For
    Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Your Heart So Kind! ! ! ! !
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    Unwritten Soul(7/24/2017 5:27:00 AM)

    Thank you Rebecca, i think to have people smiling like you are now is the best treat to have these days and whole life. This work is from me to all of you that kindly share your heart n kindness, it beyond the words but thats what i can do for all here.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/20/2017 11:53:00 PM)

    It is a mervelous poem on friendship and life having phiolosophically sound. Let me quote... So do my love i carry in me
    Here my beloved friends, my remedy
    You magnify my love across the world
    Signifying peace is here as our hands hold. It is a great tribute to friends, the poets and poetesses. Thanks for sharing.
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    Unwritten Soul(7/21/2017 9:37:00 AM)

    I think i have to say, i dedicated this to you too...because you read my work and always keep motivating me regardless how my weakness in poetry is, you only purify good things only, Thanks sir, i appreciate that...Thanks for being a great concave lens/bulb to help me deliver my light.. :)

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  • (7/19/2017 2:15:00 PM)

    Blessed glass.. who are your friends.
    And I can't comment in the ink of light, and you deserve more.
    Very very honest poem.
    Best wishes friend
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    Unwritten Soul(7/21/2017 9:41:00 AM)

    You are the blessed glass, i wont compare each of you or devaluate of you...how could i? i deserve more yes but not of myself but more from you, all of you for being kind and nice...I am just a human that has weak points too, and because great friends always push me to be far...i am better so i thank you Muhammad Ali, and all great friends. God bless all of my beloved friends! Amen

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  • Susan Williams (7/15/2017 1:36:00 PM)

    Thank you for once again broadening my horizon. I never before looked at the glass bowl surrounding a light bulb with any curiosity at all- well, you just woke me up, Soul. I have got to be much more like you and SEE what is really going on with these everyday items. Great and lasting image, my friend.
    If I am the light
    You are the magnifying chamber- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - You, Soul, are both! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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    Unwritten Soul(7/21/2017 9:38:00 AM)

    But Susan, you and other friends are the ones that keep me revived...and to have all of you is something beautiful to keep in life, no what great friends are irreplaceable, and l love them.. Thanks for always stand strong/weak with me :)

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  • (7/14/2017 11:08:00 PM)

    A truly inspired idea and a truly inspired work! This is terrific, Soul. (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(7/14/2017 11:56:00 PM)

    Beautiful friends like you n most that I have met here inspired me, I could be candle to light all of u till the end. Thanks dear

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  • Captain Cur (7/13/2017 3:20:00 PM)

    Happy Birthday Soul! Yes I voyaged back to poemhunter for a bit. Glad to see you are still aboard. Loved your poem and tribute to your friends. You are a pure creature, just like the light you describe in your poem. (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(7/14/2017 10:09:00 AM)

    Awww Thank you, I always remember all my friends and you as well, i am glad you did return that bright day! yeay. Ellias always asked me about you when we talked here, because we both know you for long, addicted to your kind heart and friendship.. I am not pure as light, i am just dark as night but not by colour but by thought...hahahaha..I am so happy you are returning even for a while since long time back, and even visit me :) it made me happy :) Thank you dear Captain! Ai Ai captain hahaha.

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  • (7/13/2017 3:11:00 PM)

    Happy birthday dear Soul. Your poem itself is a beacon that magnifies your beauty and strength of love as a person and a talented poet. Thank you for being you and thank you for your inspiring words. (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(7/14/2017 10:06:00 AM)

    Thank you for always being sweet to me each time, who said candies and sugar is the sweetest one? great friends are sweeter :) . You also a talented poet and kind person, friends....you are part of my strength and you know me more than what other people see me daily...because you read from my soul more than them...and Thank you for be friend of mine and by being beautiful you.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 13, 2017

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 26, 2017


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