Light in the chamber
Glass, you keep it inside
Not as fortress from letting it brighten the dark
But your transparency magnify its power to cross the night
So do my love i carry in me
Here my beloved friends, my remedy
You magnify my love across the world
Signifying peace is here as our hands hold
If I am the light
You are the magnifying chamber
My lovers..
great lover of words magnifies soul as a token of birthday gift to one and all who read the poems- my ten###
Soul, there is a tradition in various parts of the world in which the birthday person doesn't receive gifts, but rather, gives them to his/her friends. I see that you are part of that tradition. In addition to your friendship, you have given us these two gifts. Firstly, this beautiful heart-felt poem which speaks multitudes. And secondly, acknowledgement of our friendships. I am honoured and humbled to be included in this circle of poets who are so gifted and compassionate. May the circle never be broken! And may we all continue to share our poems with each other and provide support and encouragement. May you forever remain blessed, Soul. You are truly one of a kind!
Here there is no tradition like dear, at least so far as i observed... it just i think birthday is a anniversary of we having first day in this life, this dimension...so supposedly we should be thankful to God, parents who raised us and whoever make us stronger person and make our life so beautiful...when i am thinking of that, i feel that i should give express my thankful and giving my heart out to each person that comes along to my life journey and polished me to be better day by day...And when i wrote down i might missed someone but i dont mean it, sorry for i cant put it here...But to my greatest companion now and past, thanks for everything...your name all written on my heart's wall... :) Thanks Richard for being my good friend :)
You are really deeply, friend of all of us! ! ! You are the light we have here dear! Your heart is immense and beautiful! Thank you dear poet for your existence!
Everybody is a light and we are just amplifying each other light so what we can get is brightness! thank you dear for your words, and thank you also for be part of my life as friend that i never see but keep giving me strong hugs from far :) i do appreciate all of you. God knows!
What a nice energy enhancing poem. The conservation law has been left far behind. Thank you very much,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank you for once again broadening my horizon. I never before looked at the glass bowl surrounding a light bulb with any curiosity at all- well, you just woke me up, Soul. I have got to be much more like you and SEE what is really going on with these everyday items. Great and lasting image, my friend. If I am the light You are the magnifying chamber- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - You, Soul, are both! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
But Susan, you and other friends are the ones that keep me revived...and to have all of you is something beautiful to keep in life, no what great friends are irreplaceable, and l love them.. Thanks for always stand strong/weak with me :)