Unwritten Soul

Let We Sway, Together - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Tied under the tree of destiny
Life does swing
Come the moving time
Uncertainty blows our string
Never forget,
Hopes, run in the wind

Invisible hopes
Like the silky breeze
Born everyday, every morning
In other time, may come another blow
Too hard and we may be shaken
Still in the wind there are hopes running
Remind self there will be another morning
Whenever life is shaken
Dear, don't mourning
Let we follow the flow of new beginning
Swayed our life string
Sway and sway together

Hope in morning
Without a warm sun
Morning never awaken
Without love being a shelter
Tempting smiles wouldn't be better
If love that we shared is for temporary made
Warm in you my friend, lovely one never it will fade
Thou arise from my heart like a rising sun
I know morning has come by your sunshine
Torch me your light in whisper charm
Warming more with innocent calm
Let nightmare sleep after the dawn
My hope is here, as you come

Awaken by you
My morning is awaken
O dear you bring my morning light
Shelter my heart, and bright all the parts
In my chest, with love you have it pure
Year to year we be here, you still with me
Bringing me the other morning smiles
Unending telling me hope is around

Under this tree, tree of destiny
Fate was delivered on us
For us sway together
Your morning light to my life string
Swayed in a breeze of hope
Together we are together we will ever

The born of the sun
A young one
Has risen in my heart
Not only mine but many hearts
Paint the sky be a morning
Keep it bright let light stronger
Stronger in summer never fade in winter
Be the true sun be the true charm
Many hearts are awaiting for you to come
Bring their hearts a morning light
Love to be in their arms
Remind them, hope always come
In the wind, In the wind
That reborn every morning

Tied at one of the branches
Under tree of destiny
My life swaying by a string
It may shaken, one day it will fallen
Your morning light tell me a hope
Always running in the wind
Dear little sun
Thanks for your little sunshine
We shall meet again
Every morning
Till the broken of my string
That will be our ending

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The poem is dedicated, specially to ELLIAS my friend
For his past birthday..As he always like to write humanity and hope poems
I refer him as a source of morning light, and morning light is a new day
A new day and new beginning for us to move for a new start in life,
And i imagining that many souls/life are hanging under the tree of destiny
and uncertainty is like a storm and shake the life harder
In the wind, the gentle one always a hope swimming
The best one when it is at morning day,
So as he is the sun-like who bringing the morning
I want him to be a character to tell hope is coming everyday
In every morning moving in the wind,

Ellias, Thanks a lot for your support on me for all these days
You be my co-writer for two poems and gave a nice poem to me
Never doubt on me and always supportive! Quack Quack! ! ! !
you shall be my lil friend forever! ! The best wishes for you
_Unwritten Soul

Comments about Let We Sway, Together by Unwritten Soul

  • Dev Anand (9/1/2017 6:22:00 AM)

    this is a fine poem für Ellias celebrating your wonderful friendship. may oyu have so many such friends here. God bless u dear poetess. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/17/2017 6:58:00 PM)

    It is a marvellous poem having stunning expression full of positiveness and also a great dedication to your friend Ellias who enspires you ever. Let it be quoted some lines in this regard..
    Under this tree, tree of destiny
    Fate was delivered on us
    For us sway together
    Your morning light to my life string
    Swayed in a breeze of hope
    Together we are together we will ever
    Thanks for sharing this lovely gem.
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  • Simone Inez Harriman (6/12/2017 5:29:00 AM)

    A stunning write. Just beautiful...you are so talented Soul. This one touched my heart...10+++ (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/13/2017 6:06:00 AM)

    Awwww thanks dear, you are so kind to me...hope you enjoyed it

  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/7/2016 8:07:00 AM)

    The light of hope! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2013 6:15:00 AM)

    A lovely, heartfelt and most worthy tribute, Soul.
    Sweet, uplifting sentiments.
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  • (3/27/2013 11:38:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem Soul, it truly shows what poetry can do for the whole world....the unity that poets on this site shows is amazing.....I feel blessed to be part of this site....
    Siya_! !
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  • (3/9/2013 7:15:00 AM)

    An amazing intellectual exercise in the form a poem that emanates its best.
    This poem is an Unwritten Soul piece with remarkable charm! Let us sway together in this forum...
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  • Valsa George (3/9/2013 5:54:00 AM)

    Enjoyed reading this tale of intimate companionship! It breathes out hope, ever growing hope, never shaken by the gales of life! ! (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (3/6/2013 6:01:00 PM)

    Love when i see the friends so close. For me friend is the best of life. Who support us even when we are wrong! Friends no doubt! I have 2 big ones and searching for more. Great poem Soul. Thanks. Now i have what to say to mine loved ones and friends. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (3/5/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    A nice Hope poem. Optimism is in every line.10++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (3/3/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    Soul…..I am truly speechless. I have no words to say. I think my deep thanks give you the message, or a quack….yeah…the word Quack, has lots of things to say, it can say that life has lots of meanings but it can be so simple. We can deliver our messages of peace and love with simple words, simple smiles, we can be friends all over the world as I always say. Every day we wake up with a hope, but sometimes this feeling that THERE IS NO DIFFERENT AND HOPE in the life ahead, will make me worry, it will hurt me from depth...There is nothing to be glad of..At least the things those I dream...The sweet days….. It's been long time since I had sweet diaries with the friends those we invited, long time that I had my true friends with their smile. Now, I just look around myself, look at the sky and see the planes crossing this sky. I always hope to have the hope to find new hopes in them. And those hopes are the friends all over the world. The true hearts and loves. I just have 21 days to take my answer. To see a person…And I am truly depressed it's been long time that I am not smooth from inside... And your work, your work is just a spiritual gift. And I should say that I love this work and I love you soul. You were the first one who helps me here. And now…..I should always turn this device on, look at my inbox……Hey Anderson, I am coming! ! ! ! ! ! ! YUK! It's a dream….it's a dream to see such message, but the worse is the fake patient….is the promises those you get in a quandary about them after times. People who can't live up your exceptions…so, you make a world in your dreams, Ysa (one of my poem's name) in that world, there is love, there is arrival of the people who you look forward to. There is difference at last for its people. I just can say thanks. From the depth of my clunker heart. You are amazingly great and perfect. The warm heart existence, the noble soul.
    Ellias A.
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  • Maria C. Pires Costa (3/3/2013 8:54:00 AM)

    Heartfelt poetic thread brightening other readers' soul. May your days keep being visited by that morning sun! Keep up sharing with us your emotions.

    All the best,
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 3, 2013

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