Light Up My Way Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Light Up My Way

Rating: 5.0


A lonely bird on a rooftop stands,
His silhouette through the mist I see,
Crows hover in the foggy air,
Their sounds carry unto me,
Where is the sunshine?
The flowers no more,
Where are you now?
For I'm missing you so,
Is there hope for me,
That maybe one day,
The mist will rise,
To light up my way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 01 December 2022

We hear your sad cry, so beautifully written, so sincere and so true as we share your sadness and solitude, too.

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Nosheen Irfan 02 December 2022

Winter season is gloomy but it inspires great poetry. Well penned. Loved it!

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Richard Wlodarski 01 December 2022

Beautiful!

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David Wood 01 December 2022

Beautifully written Jayne, a good 5*

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 December 2022

Straight from the heart. Yeah someday your path will be lighted and you will be at peace. Beautifully written. Thanks.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 December 2022

Yes, I am with you in Newmarket, ON

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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