Like A Butterfly Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Like A Butterfly

Rating: 5.0


Who are you that hold me up
When I am weak?
I think that you are a tree
And I am the wind
That blows through your branches
Tingling when touched...

Your leaves soften the breeze
That knows no relief
From the ceaseless momentum
Of life that began
Like a wafting butterfly
Sailing in the sky!


©All Rights Reserved-2011

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kharon March 31 October 2011

very beautiful the wording behind the butterfly was brilliant keep it up man love to see more your friend Kharon march

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Cosmic Dreamer 30 October 2011

You wrote that so well that I became the butterfly... Well done...

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Vipins Puthooran 30 October 2011

Really it's a great poem/ graceful write... It brings me a wonderful picture in mind. Top marks! ! ! ! ! ! ,10+++

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Wang Qian 29 October 2011

very beautiful poem ~~^^~~

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Eric Cockrell 28 October 2011

a really beautiful poem!

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Heather Wilson 30 May 2012

A beautiful poem, a pleasure to read, thank you.

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Lillian Thomas 23 April 2012

a nice thought, well penned. Thank you for sharing.

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Sajna Kailas 05 November 2011

nice poem and i loved it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Adeline Foster 04 November 2011

How intriguing this is. I wrote one: We watch the lazy butterfly - Yet how different it turned out to be. Read mine - Sunlight's World - Adeline

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Bursting with beauty like a buterfly! Well done my friend! 10/10

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