Mind hazy, clouded, misty,
Clean it, wipe it,
Then, with a twist,
Leap! Out of the fist!
Brilliantly expressed dear madam... just fabulous.5 stars.
I can just picture it happening, very special ending to this part, very intelligently conceived, the reader really enjoys that sudden twist,5 Stars full on Top, fully awarded, Dr. Geeta!
Yes, very true. Indeed our mind need ti be cleansed, often. So aptly written short poem. You deserve 5 stars..
Short and succinct yet with high meaning in great depth....liked it...full score
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So so i spiring. Need this cleaning often as our heart tend to get foggy often. Beautiful poem.