Lilting Lyrics 2 - Leap Poem by Geeta Radhakrishna Menon

Lilting Lyrics 2 - Leap

Rating: 5.0


Mind hazy, clouded, misty,
Clean it, wipe it,
Then, with a twist,
Leap! Out of the fist!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 29 November 2021

So so i spiring. Need this cleaning often as our heart tend to get foggy often. Beautiful poem.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 29 November 2021

Profound, Very well said.5****

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 November 2021

Brilliantly expressed dear madam... just fabulous.5 stars.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 November 2021

wonderfully excellent

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Kostas Lagos 29 November 2021

Good work Geeta! Really beautiful

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 December 2021

I can just picture it happening, very special ending to this part, very intelligently conceived, the reader really enjoys that sudden twist,5 Stars full on Top, fully awarded, Dr. Geeta!

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Vrinda 02 December 2021

Short and lively.

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Praveen Menon 02 December 2021

Beautifully expressed.... Awesome work yet again

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Indulekha A menon 30 November 2021

Yes, very true. Indeed our mind need ti be cleansed, often. So aptly written short poem. You deserve 5 stars..

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Indira Renganathan 30 November 2021

Short and succinct yet with high meaning in great depth....liked it...full score

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