Limerick R33 When Kings Were Kings Poem by Rajnish Manga

Limerick R33 When Kings Were Kings

Rating: 5.0


Gone are the days when kings were kings,
Reckless, arrogant, with no moral strings,
But now they're trained,
Ordained and restrained,
By rules laid down by the lord of the rings.

(lord of the rings = general public or the subject)

Tuesday, December 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: history,kingdom,morality,people power,reckless,rule,ruler
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2015

Kings were kings and these days have gone away. Very amazing Limerick shared again with thoughtful attitudes. Fantastic definitely.10

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Rajnish Manga 15 December 2015

It is wonderful to have your critical comments and encouraging feedback, Kumarmani ji.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 December 2015

Thought provoking yet realistic limerick. My pick is, Now they are trained Ordained and restrained, By rules laid down by lords of the ring? Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Rajnish Manga 15 December 2015

Thank you very much for your nice comments coupled with insightful value addition to this poem.

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M Asim Nehal 16 December 2015

Very well thought and written limerick, Kings are no more kings....Lovely...10

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Wes Vogler 06 January 2016

You have absolutely nothing to learn about the construction of a limerick. I just posted a minimal tuition on limerick writing. Have you ever tried such a thing in hindi? Give us more limericks, please.

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Atul Rajput 18 December 2015

But now they're trained, Ordained and restrained True

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2015

Rules are always needed in life. Nice work.

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Chetan Pandey 16 December 2015

Pls.... Comment or tell any suggestions about my poem paper and the pen

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Chetan Pandey 16 December 2015

Amazing poem....... Loved it

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