We become so foolish sometimes
In attempting to write funny rhymes
But they can misfire
Making the readers tire
Won't then dare to repeat such crimes
I enjoy your Limericks and more when there are replies from Bri Edwards or Akhtar Jawadji.Thanks for your sharing..
Marvellous one. Read and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing such a diamond piece.
You won't know till you have tried Now what great woe can betide? but yours always bring a smile And they last more than awhile Write! ! but with the rules abide Thank you Valsa. always love your limericks.
Full of wit n humor. I myself could never write a limerick. But ur limericks always manage to draw smiles. A10.
Hi Valsa, Such a great poem! Yes, when one emotion is exhausted, we do seek out another....Too much comedy does awaken the need for something more dramatic...profound observations, Valsa. A 10.
Agree, no more Limericks...............................................................
I find writing humor to be the most difficult write. I can bring you to your knees crying, I can scare the ever-loving stuffing out of you, but can I dependably make you laugh? ? It's a roll of the dice. Great poem about this situation.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
you are right, very tough I think its composition that something not just funny but very poetic too. and your limericks, I found beautiful and clear. nice