Valsa George


Limericks,11,12 Love At First Sight, Love As It Runs - Poem by Valsa George

Limerick… Love at First Sight

A lad and lass, on first sight fell in love
They flew as they were a pair of dove
First it gave them pleasure
Later it raised their pressure
Cutting the bond (age) , they together exclaimed 'Wow'


Limerick… Love as it Runs


He sang-‘You're like a red, red rose
With you my life ever glows'
She sang- ‘But you're like a thorn
Your presence, I greatly mourn'
They together sang- ‘So we shall end our woes'

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Unless love comes from the heart....it can turn to be a burden!

Comments about Limericks,11,12 Love At First Sight, Love As It Runs by Valsa George

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/19/2019 2:46:00 AM)

    The first limerick about love and pressure is interesting and the second one is more interesting. Beautiful limericks with fun and humor amazingly shared. A 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (11/2/2015 2:33:00 AM)

    a pair of lovely limericks
    your poems are always a pleasure to read
    thanks Valsa-10++
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  • Savita Tyagi (7/14/2014 10:13:00 AM)

    A very pleasant read. Enjoyed this light hearted poem very much. (Report)Reply

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  • Amitava Sur (6/28/2014 11:17:00 PM)

    Very nice Valsa - both of them satisfy the real theme of limerick.... enjoyed a lot (Report)Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (6/28/2014 11:55:00 AM)

    Beautiful verses you have turned into a humorous ones.... Loved it......Smiles.. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (6/26/2014 5:48:00 AM)

    Valsa it's a different type poem from you, I really liked it. (Report)Reply

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  • Tribhawan Kaul (6/25/2014 12:55:00 AM)

    Both the limericks presents the humourous side of the poet. Second one is funnier than the first one. Enjoyed reading both. :) :) :) (Report)Reply

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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/24/2014 5:53:00 PM)

    Nice satirical verses. Hope love will have a better end sometimes. (Report)Reply

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  • Rosmin Elsa Mohan (6/24/2014 2:56:00 AM)

    A beautiful satire.. no words!
    would love to read more! :)
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  • (6/24/2014 1:40:00 AM)

    love this simple take on satire on love turning burdensome. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/23/2014 11:01:00 AM)

    A sweet love poem aesthetically conceived.........Valsa........though a kind of humorous verse.............nicely composed indeed (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 23, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 26, 2014


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