Limericks,7,8 (Dog's Bark/ Cat's Mew) Poem by Valsa George

Limericks,7,8 (Dog's Bark/ Cat's Mew)

Rating: 5.0


DOG'S BARK

In Greece, lived a young lad called Mark
All he craved was to sing like a lark
After intense training for long
With expert help all along
As he sang, it sounded like a dog's bark

CAT'S MEW

A pussy cat seeing some milk inside a pot,
Ignorant, it would become a Gordian knot,
Put her head inwards.
Alas, the pot turned upwards
With head jammed inside, she mewed distraught!

Tuesday, October 15, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In response to Bri Edwards' challenge!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diane Hine 15 October 2013

Original and entertaining limericks.

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Kavya . 15 October 2013

a hilarious one..........gud write

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Bri Edwards 15 October 2013

valsa, PLEASE! A valiant effort you've made indeed, but NOT all poems are for me to read. Because you're my friend i read both to the end, but don't write more of THEM, i plead! but SERIOUSLY, i give you a quite good score. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 October 2013

I had a hearty laugh reading these limericks. I know for sure that if someone challenges, you win.

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Danny Draper 15 October 2013

It seems that the challenge has ended the cat and dog both surrendered alas no art was offended in high hand' and a town sleeps safe in Ireland.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 June 2019

I don't know what the challenge was but on reading the two limericks, it does not matter., the laugh comes good anyway.

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Mj Lemon 05 June 2019

I can just see that distraught cat...hope that Gordian knot gets sliced off. These are gems, Valsa. To myfavourites.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2018

As he sang, it sounded like a dog's bark......ha..ha..ha..so funny. In second Limerick....Cat put her head inwards in a pot is interesting but she mewed distraught is sad. Beautifully penned both limerick. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 December 2014

An interesting write......................................

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Amitava Sur 18 October 2013

Real beauty lies in simplicity, Could lough heartily, very nice.

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