Love Poem by Dr Dillip K Swain
Love
Your sterling love
Is like a gigantic sponge
That absorbs the fountain of my pain
Soaking it invisibly, awakening my soul
To withstand violent storms
Cyclonic waves and all disasters
Prompting me to climb mammoth hills
Sans soreness, pains and perils
It's your pure love
That sparks emotion
For - I dive into the ocean!
Copyright @Poet,25 January,2019
Beautiful poem. A true to life depiction of love. Inimitable metaphors and tropes make this short poem exquisite. Top score and Myfavourites
Fantastic idea in the poem reveals love is the best winner.Enjoyed.
Dear @Poet, amazing poem is this, excellently worded and brilliantly composed. TOP Stars. Enjoyed tremendously.
Indulge in repeated dives. Enjoyed reading your diving piece
Love is magnetic, forgiving, and there to sponge away whatever causes pain. Brilliant verse, Dillip.
The imagery of a 'gigantic sponge' soaking up pain and the metaphor of love as an enduring force that shields and uplifts the soul is deeply moving.
This poem powerfully portrays love as a transformative force, absorbing pain and empowering the soul to endure life's challenges.
Fantastic work. Great uise of language. Could you check out some of my poetry?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 2:45:42 AM # 1.0.0
Love is like a gigantic sponge.....Wow! Marvellous poem on Love Dillip ji......Top score and to my favourite