Wednesday, November 9, 2011


Rating: 4.7
didn't you know......
love is made of iron......
didn't you know......
heart is made of glass......
what could happen......
if love......
strike the heart......
ahmed khaled
Enyinwa Okechukwu Enyinwa 19 November 2011
Nice setting.. your works are great...
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Kaila George 13 November 2011
yes love is fragile...anything can happen when in love...its a wonderful poem and depics how fragile it can be when in a you treat it can be intresting as well...well done..excellent work
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Eric Cockrell 11 November 2011
very good imagery... and very true! good poetry!
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Abdallah Gamal 10 November 2011
Wow beautiful poem, outstanding, with a little lines you drew a unique picture full of different metaphors. Great work ma bro. :)
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K. Lemonspunk 10 November 2011
Very good. Lovely wording and great image to bring to mind. It is very nice.
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Vipins Puthooran 10 November 2011
I think, it's a rare imagination though it's a well-expressed thought in a short poem... I've many to say about love but a few words, ''Love is Divine! ''..
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Shamba Kaunda 09 November 2011
its so rare to express feelings and imaginations in such a short phrase...well done..please read and comment on my poem i wanted to paint, thanx
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Unwritten Soul 09 November 2011
If love made of iron, it can bend or can be shaped to fit your heart space, if love is from glasses it can easily shattered and break, yet it will bleed your heart If your love made with pure soul and then it will care your heart and soul have strong ability as iron and shiny as glass... Soul to Love and Love for heart..nice write Ahmed, I agree with all comments here :) _Unwritten Soul
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Costin Tanasescu 09 November 2011
Ahmed, i can say about your '' poem that you are on the right poetry way. I usually prefer the poems who contains concise lyrics so you are very close to my favorite poetry filed, sfere... good look!
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Jack Price 09 November 2011
First sir, thanks for the invite! It is a remarkable and striking poem. I myself like short poetry because it is thought provoking. I will add this to my favorites list. thanks again. call me J. L.
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