...Love Me For Who I Am Poem by Eyan Desir

...Love Me For Who I Am

Rating: 4.8


I'm a creature
Short of great beauty
Without great riches
Short of excellent
Sometimes I make mistakes
My love isn't perfect
It's not my fault
Sometimes love is like salt
I am a Cherry
I'm not the sweetness
Other are sweeter
The grass might be greener
On the other side
Love me for who I am

My beauty live within
My love is unique
It's one of a kind
It has honesty
Plus Integrity
It isn't the greatest
It come to please
Take it as it is and
Love me for who I am

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammed Albalushi 25 April 2009

love me for who iam, its nice to be wat ur and its nicer if someone love u for who ur, take me all as iam(human) will done dear

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 21 April 2009

Well written, echoing the sentiments of many. Strange how goodness is seen then not long, people want to manipulate and change who you are, when that happens they dont like what you have become and you dont know you anymore moral of the story - be who you are and be happy

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Britney Hogue 21 April 2009

lovely write and some could take a lesson from it. I like your comparisons in this poem. Britney

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everybody should be loved what they are...great poem

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Sandra Martyres 17 April 2009

Love me for who I am is a really beautiful poem... I like your choice of words and the soft flow of the verses..10

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Janell Cressman 09 May 2009

bravo! ! ! ! it is beautiful! !

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It seems like you've taken my thoughts and written them down! ! ! Such a fantastic poem! ! ! ! ! Truly honest, and you've bared your soul. How brave you are! Great job!

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Mona Martinez 02 May 2009

wow. i love that. word for word the whole poem is true in so many ways. just love me for who i am, just says it all.

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seeking unconditional love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! loved it best of luck given 10

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Excelent Eyan. Very sentimental, i could feel the heart!

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