... Making Love ** Poem by Eyan Desir

I enjoyed the expression in your lines of this poem. You definitely took me to another place, I think you know where. Well done.

Dear Love Dr. You are taking the readers somewhere until we reach the last line and figure out where the readers are. Regards, Nooruddeen

very exciting verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Short and good choices of words, hence the whole mood of that particular moment is captured all in all, just love it.TSG.M

Your poem is really exciting. You have been able to capture the mood of the moment. Congrats!

Most modestic poem of making love…you’ve tailored nicely… But sensuality may be better option for ‘lust’… Ms. Nivedita UK

Beautiful ahhh amazing

Wonderful words and wonderful poem!

lovely poem with lovable words........ heart beating rhythm.......

Romantic and affectionate. Truly an episode of passion. DC