a girl called maria
which i don`t know
told me to write a poem
about her as though
her beautiful face
i already saw
i wanna ask u
in what law
u give me no ink
and tell me to draw
Enchanting. You saw Maria through the panes of your soul. And this is the beautiful result.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra
iIt's incredible poem. on the divorce, you are a big thing.but it does not sound great, surely cos you are using us language.I know British language is too difficult to you.call me and I can give many hands; do not get me wrong.time and pratise will lead you to mastery in British.the devils with yours.
it seems, right here, you have drawn a poem portrait with the warm ink of your heart...beautiful poem...nicely expressing the inside desire and feel...10
in what law u give me no ink and tell me to draw.... Fantastic curve from passion to intelligence. Post-modern criteria never ends with the existing dilemma.....ask and ask and try to penetrate the origin of art itself. Thank you.10/10 Regards, pranab
Sweet, simple and pure, even your normal life is “poetry”
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A delightful piece...merits a 10++