Maria Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Maria

Rating: 4.6


a girl called maria
which i don`t know
told me to write a poem
about her as though
her beautiful face
i already saw
i wanna ask u
in what law
u give me no ink
and tell me to draw

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 27 May 2009

A delightful piece...merits a 10++

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Sandra Fowler 19 May 2009

Enchanting. You saw Maria through the panes of your soul. And this is the beautiful result.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Delicate Heart 11 April 2009

iIt's incredible poem. on the divorce, you are a big thing.but it does not sound great, surely cos you are using us language.I know British language is too difficult to you.call me and I can give many hands; do not get me wrong.time and pratise will lead you to mastery in British.the devils with yours.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 March 2009

it seems, right here, you have drawn a poem portrait with the warm ink of your heart...beautiful poem...nicely expressing the inside desire and feel...10

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 10 January 2009

Fantastic....thanks for sharing

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Pranab K Chakraborty 02 November 2010

in what law u give me no ink and tell me to draw.... Fantastic curve from passion to intelligence. Post-modern criteria never ends with the existing dilemma.....ask and ask and try to penetrate the origin of art itself. Thank you.10/10 Regards, pranab

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Zahira Shaban 14 September 2010

Oh my, this is by far the best till now!

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 17 September 2009

Sweet, simple and pure, even your normal life is “poetry”

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Obed Souza 14 August 2009

A lovely piece! 10

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Amanda Williams 01 June 2009

this poem is gourgoues and totally sweet

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