Me And My Soul Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Me And My Soul

Rating: 5.0


I met my soul under the ocean
quiet, calm and enduring
In serenity with joy.

I met my soul on the mountain top
spirited, high and in pride
restless and eager to fly.

And I met my soul on the earth
unrest, busy and discontent
angry and jealous.

Same soul at three different places
In three different shades
same body to manipulate.

Sunday, December 18, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical,lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 18 December 2022

I nearly left my soul in the ocean, on a rock face and elsewhere a few times on my past. Must take more care! !

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 December 2022

Excellent Asim Wonderful Top 5 Bravo! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 18 December 2022

Excellent work.....as always.....thank u, dear friend....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2022

A brilliant poem.....I liked the underlying philosophy. Full marks.

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Nosheen Irfan 19 December 2022

Sheer brilliance of intellect. A poetic gem!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 20 December 2022

And I met my true self; nice to read the introspective poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 December 2022

I like how this poem was crafted and presented. A poem of great depth and very thought provoking. Brilliant! To my favorites.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 December 2022

A wonderful poem by a wonderful poet, I have enjoyed it thoroughly, dear Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir.5 Stars Top Score!

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Brilliant! Thought-Provoking! Exquisite poetry. Top score

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Richard Wlodarski 19 December 2022

I nearly left my soul on the Grand Canyon. Thanks to meditation and God, I survived. This is a deeply soulful poem, my friend! An absolutely great read!

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