Midsummer Thoughts Poem by Unwritten Soul

Midsummer Thoughts

Rating: 4.7


Everytime the flowers bloom you smile then they gone
Everytime green grows, then red and yellow fall
before shedding by the snow, and the cycle rotates.
I've learned what stay true for a tree are woody skeletons
I've learned that
Everytime fortune comes and go
Everytime pain visit and leave
Stay to to yourself, your core, your soul
At the end that is the one that keep you strong, like woody skeleton

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Colours are just colours, what make them a scenery is
how we place different ones on the surface,
to be here or to be there.
I say, it just only our illusion... but eyes decided to believe what they perceived. Somehow, feelings are just like colours
it's how we put in our believe that will build our life wholly.
Is it life is art or art is part of life... is it dark or you prefer bright...you choose what you believe...but life isnt an illusion
it is what you believe to be
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And when we get wet under the pouring rain,
we blame it for the water falling...

And when we cry because of we feel pain
to knife or any hands (hurt) we may blame...
and again it's about blame, because we tend to blame
perhaps, it's much easier to blame than to admit or to understand.
If clouds cover the blue (sky) above you,
stand your umbrella if you like to, or dont blame the rain if it fall on you. Sometimes is not about bad day, not about rainy day
As clouds never know where are you, not even know
when the water they carry will fall onto.
....It just sometimes it because ourselves too..

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I take out words from my mouth and spell them on the paper
Not a poetry
It just my mind
that demand to speak loud

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Guidance was born as light
and light may born/delivered as spark of knowledge
as touch of kindness, or secretly living in your abilities
Just remember, there is no usefulness to place a bright candle in a black box
as there is no usefulness of light if it not meant to brighten the way, to guide, to ease surrounding...
If owning us just only make ourselves keep the pride, surely the light already faded..Because light was created for you and surrounding. Put Roshni/light (roshni is urdu/hindi word)in your heart..may it brighten your way wherever you go.

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Uncertainty in life is like a boat wandering in the wide ocean
You dont have to big a big one, enough be the small one without hole
so you wont drown...Where you will go
is where you direct yourself
either sail by the seasonal winds
or moved by the ocean waves
....By the constellation of stars
or the place of sun to rise and set
bright your mind to see where we are heading to
and we will harbour at a destination, your choice of destiny
your decision...no regret, life is a journey till we ended it.

Saturday, July 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: thought
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On 13th July i posted the first one (top one) , then today maybe later i will add new /fix some of them...because i want to share more on 13th...perhaps this page will always have new summer thoughts that wandering in my mind...not a poetry...just to share to who like to read what my wandering mind used to go/think...surely its not fun one..haha.. The last post/update final thoughts of midsummer will be on 31st of July.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 06 January 2020

There is something about mid summer that triggers nostalgia. Each season does seem to have its own personality. Adding to this poem is a great idea. Every mid summer can provide inspiration for...a work that is living and always in progress. A great work, Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2019

This poem' Midsummer Thoughts' is a brilliant poem having captivating expression bearing a lofty theme that life is a journey till we ended it. Thank you dear soul for sharing this valuable poem with us. Full vote.

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Unwritten Soul 27 July 2019

Thank u dear, you are too kind to title it as a poem.... To me it just a compilation of thoughts that i constantly have and put in one page separated by.......... The language i use never good ones to be a poetry.. Thanks for appreciating my thoughts, acompilation actually... Thanks dear

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Lyn Paul 18 July 2019

Sensitive and beautiful " Midsummer Thoughts" Always wonderful to read your words.

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Unwritten Soul 24 July 2019

Such a positive message, thanks Lyn!

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 July 2019

Very impressive write, Unwritten Soul. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Unwritten Soul 24 July 2019

I have read it before, so i read another piece of yours...Thanks Jazib, i appreciate it :)

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Khairul Ahsan 13 July 2019

The last four lines impressed me: 'Everytime fortune comes and go Everytime pain visit and leave Stay to to yourself, your core, your soul At the end that is the one that keep you strong, like woody skeleton'. - Loved your suggestion.

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Unwritten Soul 24 July 2019

Thank you dear Khairul, midsummer thoughts is a compilation of this summer.... i thought nobody will like it and what you said make me feel motivated to write more...thanks a lot :)

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