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Moon's Lullaby (Berceuse De La Lune) - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Hiding wide blue
Dark breath taking over the sky
Hushing on face of the night
Though day wont be so dark
While night wont be as day bright
When the sun is running away
Eyes to the only face, i can turn to
De la lune, Moon.. its only you
Singing lullaby in every time
With me when night comes

So many hearts locked in the darkness
Will there any light to heal soon?

Counting stars with true smile
In your eyes, they reflected in deep
As much living in dark with you
As dark as our time can be
Beautiful cant be denied
When sparks scattered
And chant beauty on you
If we could count blessing
It can't be counted till the dawn
Telling you many ones on your side
And days, they surely will come
In new brightness and warm

If your heart sink and down tonight
Maybe new day tomorrow your smile can be saved

Under this tree i witnessing
One of my stars is falling down
Never it will be up again
Look! Look upon your head
Still countless left for you
So if today pains steal your heart away
Hiding sorrow in the dark breath
Sing your soul a lullaby
Our moon's lullaby
Feel the blessing presence
So may the shines of stars
Reflecting on your eyes again
And we will count your blessing
Till morning, with your smiling
Till the new rising day coming
And do fly now in sweet dream

Shine in the darkness of your heart
Like sparkling stars inside
Though it can't be bright as day light
It wont deny the beauty we had
Now let close your eyes
With a song from the moon
Berceuse de la lune
I sing for thou
Sleep well...Sweet Dream
My sweet ones

Poet's Notes about The Poem

July 13th: Berceuse de la lune (moon's lullaby)

if we fall into problem and think its over
no..its not over yet...because if the star went fallen still millions in the sky for you and dont compare brightness day and night...day will be always brightest than night but with the moon we still have light, and yes it beautiful..so even in our bad living dont complain
because our life is still beautiful, just view in other way..we cant see. how loyal stars are to us even in darkness..
So keep your hope and life stay shining all the way all the time

Dedicated to all my close fellows in PH (because you are my stars)

Comments about Moon's Lullaby (Berceuse De La Lune) by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/13/2018 7:34:00 PM)

    Shine in the darkness of your heart
    Like sparkling stars inside
    Though it can't be bright as day light
    It wont deny the beauty we had..............yes, so true. Beautiful poem with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.
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  • Jacqui Broad (6/25/2016 1:43:00 PM)

    now i know what i feel when i sometimes sit alone in the middle of the night, looking at de la lune ....yes, you have captured the mood very well.....the loneliness and mystery of nature only a poet as great as you can understand .... (Report) Reply

  • Jodie Hardy (8/27/2013 5:33:00 AM)

    Beautiful writing, just wonderful, Thak you for sharing x x (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/14/2013 8:42:00 AM)

    Thanks for dedicating the poem to all of us. It's a nice poem. Moon has charmed poets and lovers through ages and inspired them to write and love beautifully.
    Thanks to all the fellow poets who shared their thoughts and appreciations here.
    Special thanks to Diane Hine for giving some useful information about our moon here.
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  • Beach Girl (8/14/2013 6:43:00 AM)

    Absolutely beautiful! You are definitely one of the better poets on this site. Loved your notes about your poem also. (Report) Reply

  • (8/13/2013 11:23:00 AM)

    The moon is movement... as is your poem, Soul... very nice... Terry (Report) Reply

  • (8/12/2013 3:06:00 AM)

    moon's lullaby, , any lullaby is nostalgic, (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (8/12/2013 2:13:00 AM)

    The moon enchanted you to sing such a tuneful song, lovely write dear Soul
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  • Neela Nath Das (8/11/2013 10:16:00 AM)

    I loved the images of this poem.It's happening before my eyes, so cinematic! And for the theme? Oh! Hope is the thing in which I love to sleep and dream.I'm alive, because hope allows me to live.Beautiful soul in a word! (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (8/11/2013 3:17:00 AM)

    Even though Saturn and Jupiter have moons slighter larger than ours, Earth has the largest moon relative to it's own size and we're lucky with that. So it's certainly worth singing about! - lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2013 7:02:00 AM)

    beautiful with amazing imagery
    really enjoyed to read it
    thanks for sharing
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  • (7/23/2013 9:53:00 AM)

    Shine in the darkness of your heart
    Like sparkling stars inside.

    wonderful poem my friend, you are a the brightest star man.
    Siya_! !
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  • (7/23/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    A great moon rhapsody in write.. Try Moonsong whan you have a spare couple of minutes.. (Report) Reply

  • (7/21/2013 7:54:00 PM)

    My lullaby is truly yours child though I am bit late for the Big day celebrations! God bless you forever. Long live: -) (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (7/20/2013 11:57:00 AM)

    This poem reminds me the galaxy, every good things. And this holy month. (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (7/19/2013 10:33:00 PM)

    A poem with soul of its own, dear Soul. When you are like the all pervasive Moon over the PH, who am I perhaps of your stars dim and far from the earth of realities? This poem reflects upon the dark domains of a mind the light of a Moon dear to all. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (7/18/2013 5:56:00 AM)

    Beautiful, mesmerizing with great imagery! (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/17/2013 9:20:00 PM)

    A very romantic poem about the moon.The moon casts it's
    shadows all through the night. Most of the time it lights up
    the skies except when half, quarter or on a starry night. Good
    write. Please read my poem Diamonds in the Sky.
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  • Valerie Dohren (7/16/2013 3:30:00 PM)

    A great philosophy Soul, beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (7/16/2013 5:26:00 AM)

    we all shine like the moon and the stars and the sun.this poem reminds me a statement by Mark Twain.he said: (every one is like moon.we all have darker side but we may never show it to anybody)

    but i think the ones who show their darker side are really brave and honest to show their dark side.
    about this poem i say yes this is so clear and easy to understand.it gives me lot of hopes.a fine poem dear _soul
    personally to me it does have lot of meanings
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 14, 2013

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