Mourning Sickness Poem by Chuck Audette

Mourning Sickness

Rating: 5.0


For an umpteenth time, I fix my tie
glance at the clock and sigh
The memorial service starts at eight
And as always, we'll be late
I yell 'Hon, what are you waiting for? '
and from her side of the bathroom door:
'Tell them I've got mourning sickness'
(I laugh at such a witty quickness)
she opens the door, perplexed somehow
then gives me a smiling hug
says 'therein lies the rub -
it's doubly funny now'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Reynolds 08 January 2007

I found this rather inter-resting this two-in-one tale, of things that matter I see a blue line, from the testing and impending sounds of pitter-patter? Danny

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Esther Leclerc 06 January 2007

Worlds of fun and intelligence in your poetry, Chuck, and this is no exception! Thanks for the belly laugh! Est : ]

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Ernestine Northover 06 January 2007

Clever witty poem Charles, very well thought out. I enjoyed it, it had a good story line and a snazzy ending. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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R H 06 January 2007

Astutely penned Chuck. Your observations on life are real and so is your poetry...Justine :)

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Oh yeah, I love it when a snapshot of life is taken to another level like this. Everything works here. Ez

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Barry Van Allen 24 April 2007

Chuck, She most likely was a normal person once, besides what you did to her, what have you done to to her ? I just know that you are proud of both. B.V.A.

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Gina Onyemaechi 18 January 2007

Another witty pun. Love, Gina.

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Dee Daffodil 17 January 2007

Awww poor thing...tell her I feel for her...crackers..eat crackers before getting out of bed! Hugs, Dee

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Brian Dorn 09 January 2007

Awesome write, Chuck... your poetry is the perfect fix for 'mourning' sickness. I'm not sure about the morning sickness though? Brian

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alice sunderland 09 January 2007

doubly funny indeed chuckler! ! excellence. al

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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