My Angelic Drop Poem by Tareq Jalabi

My Angelic Drop

Rating: 4.8


angels had to drop
of water one drop
it left the sky high up
and fell gently in my half empty cup
she filled it with the happines that no one can stop
water doesn`t fall or pop
but this was a mericale in my cup
so when ur chance comes u should hop
to it and never wait for that drop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nia Riz 16 November 2008

a simple poem...yet so beautiful! ! ! ....if you have noticed or i dont know if you have written it like that....but all the lines end in the letter 'P'

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Min Sia 16 November 2008

Simple yet rivers of emotions flowing through! Really touching!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 August 2008

...a 10 has been clicked for this fine poem.

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Stacey Watts 13 August 2008

Really beautiful poem.

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Sage of Time 11 August 2008

i love how you ended your sentences in p's its very catchy....nice (^_^)

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

I had enjoy readind this!

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Leslie Ching 27 December 2008

very interesting and picturesque...well done... lc

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Now this is a really very clever and very effective. Great work

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First i imagined a angel dropping then tears falling then someone crying. I like poems like that, so it was a great read, thanks for sharing.

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Anjali Chandra 20 November 2008

a very simple nice poem.i reaally like it

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