My Crown Poem by Aftab Alam

My Crown

Rating: 4.8


I came here to fetch love
My master has thrown
I will hand over to Him
By keeping it into my crown
Through the living bodies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 04 July 2013

Good poem. Well read.

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Heather Wilkins 01 July 2013

love is something we all long for. excellent write

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David Wood 01 July 2013

Love lives in the heart and flows from the heart. Lovely Poem.

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Ramesh Rai 29 June 2013

is there any more precious than love. xlent

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Farah Ilyas 28 June 2013

I came here to fetch love...hope u r do so in well form...nice poem

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 07 August 2013

Good. The trend to distribute the God's present is well appreciated.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 July 2013

A lovely nice short n sweet poem! Pls coment my fastin poem.

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Yasmin Khan 12 July 2013

Wearing a crown bejeweled with love is the purpose of being, a good write

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 July 2013

Your rule is welcome. Nice poem.

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Patricia Grantham 06 July 2013

You came to fetch love and got it. Hold on to it and never let it go. Nice.

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