My Feet Ii Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

My Feet Ii

Rating: 5.0


I want to defy Mother Nature
When will I go barefoot to the mailbox?
I want to feel the badly maintain grass
Of my lawn on the balls of my feet
I want the filth on them
But I must wait until the snow melt
I just have to be satisified with the rug
In the living room
But I can't wait long

Saturday, April 2, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: summer time,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2022

But I must wait until the snow melt I just have to be satisified with the rug In the living room But I can't wait long....wonderful expression! Well penned.

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M. Asim Nehal 02 April 2022

We only realise the importance of little things when we loose it, hope ice will melt soon and you get back to the grass once again...Wonderful poem reminding us to enjoy small things we ignore often. Full********

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M. Asim Nehal 02 April 2022

In UK weather is not so harsh and I can enjoy the touch of grass on my feet. Today is bright sunshine.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 April 2022

Such beautiful passive defiance! A breath of fresh air in these violent times!

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Kostas Lagos 02 April 2022

Be patient and keep on writing!

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Indira Renganathan 08 April 2022

The instinct of the human desire to enjoy nature is well written....an enjoyable poem

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Mother Nature keeps many a wonders for us. From snow to the ‘filthy grass" and then a grass bed full of green shoots… yessssss! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Love it.

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I used to love to go barefoot when I was young. Too old to enjoy it now, I guess.

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Susan Williams 03 April 2022

This topic must be untouched until now! I loved it--it was quirky and tickled my fancy! I hope you continue to march to the sound of that different drummer of yours! 5 stars at the least! favoriting it too

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 April 2022

Sorry to know that snow has not melted yet, dear friend! But surely, it will. The spring will come dancing and you can dance on the grass with your bare feet. You have to wait a little more, perhaps, LeeAnn.......lovely..10

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