1.
Words escape my mouth.
Not necessarily the
words I want to speak...
2.
Tears escape my eyes.
Not necessarily what
I want it to do...
3.
Blood escapes my heart.
Not necessary, but I
have lost all control...
4.
Air escapes my nose.
It's not necessary, but
nonetheless it does...
You use all things that you feel that you have to talk something true in you..Bravo Jacqui! _Unwritten Soul
I love the meaning and deepness yet simplicity of this poem...good write -SG
Very interesting, well written lady Broad, I would also want to conclude that eyes view me the unseen not nessecary, because I want to, but because I want them to steal way beyond the unseen. Nice piece there
Great poem Jacqui, really captures the feeling of a passive existence. Sometimes we all drift on autopilot, allowing ourselves to be carried along by life. I like it.
Yeah, truly said... Its not necessary that we want things the way they are happening... Wonderful write :)
Howdy Jacqueline! Hey Your phenomenal personal touch and plethora feeling can deal with any heart..... Your words can heal any wounds. I hail these poetic lines...... 'Air escapes my nose. It's not necessary, but nonetheless it does...' Moreover, every line in the poem is special as the words of Swami Vivekananda.............. :) :) take the smiles I give you take the garland I give you but never take my life even if give you.. Ha! Ha! (Just if it's time for humor)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very very powerful, a great poem.