Not Necessarily... Poem by Jacqui Broad

Not Necessarily...

Rating: 5.0


1.
Words escape my mouth.
Not necessarily the
words I want to speak...
2.
Tears escape my eyes.
Not necessarily what
I want it to do...
3.
Blood escapes my heart.
Not necessary, but I
have lost all control...
4.
Air escapes my nose.
It's not necessary, but
nonetheless it does...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 28 November 2011

Very very powerful, a great poem.

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Unwritten Soul 28 November 2011

You use all things that you feel that you have to talk something true in you..Bravo Jacqui! _Unwritten Soul

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Shadow Girl 28 November 2011

I love the meaning and deepness yet simplicity of this poem...good write -SG

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Very interesting, well written lady Broad, I would also want to conclude that eyes view me the unseen not nessecary, because I want to, but because I want them to steal way beyond the unseen. Nice piece there

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Melancholy Man 30 November 2011

Great poem Jacqui, really captures the feeling of a passive existence. Sometimes we all drift on autopilot, allowing ourselves to be carried along by life. I like it.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 November 2011

great poem again Jacqueline, , , ,

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Jinal Oswal 29 November 2011

Yeah, truly said... Its not necessary that we want things the way they are happening... Wonderful write :)

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Crimson Love 28 November 2011

Such a stunning poem, You never cease to amaze jacqui. :)

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Harindhar Reddy 28 November 2011

Howdy Jacqueline! Hey Your phenomenal personal touch and plethora feeling can deal with any heart..... Your words can heal any wounds. I hail these poetic lines...... 'Air escapes my nose. It's not necessary, but nonetheless it does...' Moreover, every line in the poem is special as the words of Swami Vivekananda.............. :) :) take the smiles I give you take the garland I give you but never take my life even if give you.. Ha! Ha! (Just if it's time for humor)

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