O my friend Jerry,
You are a sweet cherry.
You have perfected your life,
After a great great strife.
You have maintained self discipline,
Marking your life neat and clean.
As a poet I can understand you,
For you are as lovely as morning dew.
But this is not an end,
In life there is a lot to bend.
Life is a struggle till the last breath,
And the struggle ends only with death.
'26/12/2014 Vijaypur Karnataka India'
Life is a struggle till the last breath, And the struggle ends only with death. A thoughtful poem.........10
A beautiful poem with fantastic words of conclusion.. But this is not an end, In life there is a lot to bend. Life is a struggle till the last breath, And the struggle ends only with death. Very true said, in life there is lot of bend and struggle never ends till death. Loved reading it.
Life is a struggle till the last breath, And the struggle ends only with death........True said. A captivating and didactive poem I like most. Thank u for sharing this great poem.
Sir everyone can't tell his admire of friend, if he has poet then he tells about his best friend only one things you have told correct 'Life is a full of struggle till the last breath, And struggle will ends with only death" .you are advising to the people, reader, viewers of poems through poem.Abdul Qayyum Mulla
The life of another, ith the ups and dons seen through your eyes, the poet. It's a wonderful poem! It as a pleasure for me to read it.10 +++
Enjoyed reading your poem. In life there is a lot to bend - true, I liked this line.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Perfect lyrical poem. In a very simple way, you have given the gist of life. One has to put in efforts at every stage even when he thinks he has achieved his life's goal.