O My Friend Jerry Poem by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

O My Friend Jerry

Rating: 5.0


O my friend Jerry,
You are a sweet cherry.
You have perfected your life,
After a great great strife.

You have maintained self discipline,
Marking your life neat and clean.
As a poet I can understand you,
For you are as lovely as morning dew.

But this is not an end,
In life there is a lot to bend.
Life is a struggle till the last breath,
And the struggle ends only with death.

'26/12/2014 Vijaypur Karnataka India'

Friday, December 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friend
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I came to know about my childhood friend about how he perfected his life and in his affection I wrote this poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 26 December 2014

Perfect lyrical poem. In a very simple way, you have given the gist of life. One has to put in efforts at every stage even when he thinks he has achieved his life's goal.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 December 2014

Life is a struggle till the last breath, And the struggle ends only with death. A thoughtful poem.........10

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Gajanan Mishra 17 January 2015

Life is a struggle, right, I do agree.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 May 2015

A beautiful poem with fantastic words of conclusion.. But this is not an end, In life there is a lot to bend. Life is a struggle till the last breath, And the struggle ends only with death. Very true said, in life there is lot of bend and struggle never ends till death. Loved reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2015

Life is a struggle till the last breath, And the struggle ends only with death........True said. A captivating and didactive poem I like most. Thank u for sharing this great poem.

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Abdul Qayyum Mulla 06 April 2020

Sir everyone can't tell his admire of friend, if he has poet then he tells about his best friend only one things you have told correct 'Life is a full of struggle till the last breath, And struggle will ends with only death" .you are advising to the people, reader, viewers of poems through poem.Abdul Qayyum Mulla

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O Poet Me Poety 19 December 2017

HOW R U DOING POET YOUR POETRY IS REACHING FAR AND WIDE

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Agatha Eliza 16 October 2015

The life of another, ith the ups and dons seen through your eyes, the poet. It's a wonderful poem! It as a pleasure for me to read it.10 +++

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Liza Sudina 14 October 2015

Good support for your friend!

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Cigeng Zhang 22 September 2015

Enjoyed reading your poem. In life there is a lot to bend - true, I liked this line.

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