Unwritten Soul


Oh Friend Of Mine - Poem by Unwritten Soul

O' friend of mine

Eyes, blind your eyes
ears, lead the way
For words to resonant
then feel will bind

Words of mine
heart of thine
they meet on surface borderline
and as the letters step on your blood
the sound of beat fast and hard
Sometimes mistaken for storm
sometimes they are peaceful ballad

In years not days
we've gone through rough and fine
of words and heart, yours and mine
before symphony blend them to sound alike
so understanding find it way
After years not few days

Strong still
Even more it must be
As more years to be shared ahead
O' friend of mine, no more to be afraid
let this feeling resonant and smile will find a way
Eyes, now open your eyes
And see how beautiful so far this journey is
Friend of mine
how wonderful our friendship is

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Wish happy birthday to my friend, and i hope to wish happy birthdat to every friend that close to me, i just wanted to appreciate them as long as i am alive...its funny to remember how years of knowing each help to know each other, make us stronger when time reveal life roughness... Great friends are always a great remedy. I writing this spontaneously after i think i have to write something in two months...and its to celebrate friends and to special wish my december born friends...Happy Birthday, you born in such festive season...All friends here, love you much!

Comments about Oh Friend Of Mine by Unwritten Soul

  • Yiyan Han (1/20/2018 7:29:00 AM)

    Nice way to appreciate friendship..well done! (Report)Reply

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  • Susan Williams (1/7/2018 3:22:00 PM)

    A beautiful song of friendship. Just the loveliest way to salute your friends and the jeweled moments they add to your life and you add to theirs. Excellent! (Report)Reply

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  • Fabrizio Frosini (12/26/2017 6:14:00 AM)

    in Italian...:

    ''Per anni, non giorni
    abbiamo attraversato difficoltà e soddisfazioni
    di parole e di affetti, i tuoi e i miei,
    prima che la sinfonia li fondesse in uno stesso suono
    e aprisse la strada alla comprensione -
    in anni, non in pochi giorni''
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    Unwritten Soul(1/5/2018 11:22:00 PM)

    Thank you dear Fabrizio Frosini, the italian words you picked and crafted guided here is by your poetry visionary..i appreciate it dear Fabrizio

    Per anni, non giorni
    di parole e di affetti, i tuoi e i miei
    Friendship start to be eternal
    of you and me

    Fabrizio Frosini(12/26/2017 6:15:00 AM)

    your lines:

    ''In years not days
    we've gone through rough and fine
    of words and heart, yours and mine
    before symphony blend them to sound alike
    so understanding find its way
    After years not few days''

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  • (12/25/2017 8:42:00 AM)

    Such an incredibly beautiful ode to friendship. Without friends, the journey would be unbearable. We must always cherish our friends. Never ever take them for granted. And thank God for bringing them into our lives. Soul, as always, you've done a masterful job! (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(1/5/2018 11:27:00 PM)

    To all one who close to our hearts, nothing is more deserved for them but pure feeling and respect, as much as desire to see them happy and keep marking life with continous success, as this year just started i hope you my friend Richard as well as other friend of mine will make it greater ahead more than what past hold!

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  • Hazel Durham (12/25/2017 6:11:00 AM)

    The true meaning of friendship is written so beautifully with the hard times together friends stand strong against the storms of life but to open our eyes to the beauty of the journey with a best friend that nobody can divide! (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(1/5/2018 11:24:00 PM)

    And to ones who appreciate our being! Thanks to you as wellllllllllllll for always stick around :) Have an amazing year Hazel, more smile and greatness will come to you sooner! i am sure you will have it!

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  • (12/22/2017 9:28:00 AM)

    a lovely soulful poem of something which a lot of people take for granted that of friendship? .............well penned US (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(1/5/2018 11:23:00 PM)

    Thank you Tom for your kind heart and sweet comment, have a wonderful year to start and to build!

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  • (12/17/2017 6:57:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem from a wonderful soul (Report)Reply

    (12/22/2017 8:01:00 AM)

    You always and too kind to me :) Thanks always

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  • Rebecca Navarre (12/16/2017 3:51:00 PM)

    Ever So Beautiful A Tribute! ! ! ! ! Ever So
    Beautifully Your Words Speak! ! ! ! ! With Words
    From The Heart That Glow And Reach! ! ! ! ! All
    Those Who Read! ! ! ! ! Again Ever So Beautiful! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !
    Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
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    Unwritten Soul(12/22/2017 8:03:00 AM)

    Rebecca, thanks for this....you overated me and my poem, but i always appreciate your kindness to me, thank you Becca.

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  • (12/16/2017 7:49:00 AM)

    Soul, an invitation to meditate on beauty of life, relation, feelings and age. it also represents the softness and warmness of your emotions and that friendship is not just a word but life. very beautiful poem dear (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(12/22/2017 8:05:00 AM)

    I am glad to read your many poems and you seem like very actively writing new poems, keep them coming...thank you for find warmness in my emotions, and thank you for being one of my good friends here. i appreciate that

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  • (12/15/2017 12:10:00 PM)

    Magnificent work, Soul. You convey the passage of time, the impact of years, and yet remind us that a great friendship can a be a great constant, an anchor, a reminder of a tie to something that does not wither with the advance of the days, the years. This is among your best works, Soul. (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(12/22/2017 8:01:00 AM)

    You are too kind my dear, i am glad that years i am here i found many good hearts that i proud to call them friends, and you are one of my proud friends!

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/15/2017 7:53:00 AM)

    Words are for words to resonate. They meet on surface borderline in tenderness and sometimes they are strong still. Sometimes they are peaceful ballad also. Closed eyes are now opened to see beautiful day with beautiful and wonderful journey of friendship. A nice birthday poem is excellently and emotinally penned....10 (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(12/22/2017 8:00:00 AM)

    :) :) Sorry for late responded to this but i should not forget to say thank you to you for always find and keep good words on my piece, thank you for always supporting me...and happy to enjoy your festive season

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/15/2017 7:12:00 AM)

    Fantastic birthday poem, I liked it, thanks for sharing...... (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(12/22/2017 7:58:00 AM)

    Thanks Asim, thanks for reading and good to know you are still here friend :)

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 15, 2017



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