Oh Friend Of Mine Poem by Unwritten Soul

Oh Friend Of Mine

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O' friend of mine

Eyes, blind your eyes
ears, lead the way
For words to resonant
then feel will bind

Words of mine
heart of thine
they meet on surface borderline
and as the letters step on your blood
the sound of beat fast and hard
Sometimes mistaken for storm
sometimes they are peaceful ballad

In years not days
we've gone through rough and fine
of words and heart, yours and mine
before symphony blend them to sound alike
so understanding find it way
After years not few days

Strong still
Even more it must be
As more years to be shared ahead
O' friend of mine, no more to be afraid
let this feeling resonant and smile will find a way
Eyes, now open your eyes
And see how beautiful so far this journey is
Friend of mine
how wonderful our friendship is

Friday, December 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wish happy birthday to my friend, and i hope to wish happy birthdat to every friend that close to me, i just wanted to appreciate them as long as i am alive...its funny to remember how years of knowing each help to know each other, make us stronger when time reveal life roughness... Great friends are always a great remedy. I writing this spontaneously after i think i have to write something in two months...and its to celebrate friends and to special wish my december born friends...Happy Birthday, you born in such festive season...All friends here, love you much!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 15 December 2017

Fantastic birthday poem, I liked it, thanks for sharing......

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Yiyan Han 20 January 2018

Nice way to appreciate friendship..well done!

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Susan Williams 07 January 2018

A beautiful song of friendship. Just the loveliest way to salute your friends and the jeweled moments they add to your life and you add to theirs. Excellent!

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Fabrizio Frosini 26 December 2017

in Italian...: ''Per anni, non giorni abbiamo attraversato difficoltà e soddisfazioni di parole e di affetti, i tuoi e i miei, prima che la sinfonia li fondesse in uno stesso suono e aprisse la strada alla comprensione - in anni, non in pochi giorni''

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Unwritten Soul 05 January 2018

Thank you dear Fabrizio Frosini, the italian words you picked and crafted guided here is by your poetry visionary..i appreciate it dear Fabrizio Per anni, non giorni di parole e di affetti, i tuoi e i miei Friendship start to be eternal of you and me

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Fabrizio Frosini 26 December 2017

your lines: ''In years not days we've gone through rough and fine of words and heart, yours and mine before symphony blend them to sound alike so understanding find its way After years not few days''

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Richard Wlodarski 25 December 2017

Such an incredibly beautiful ode to friendship. Without friends, the journey would be unbearable. We must always cherish our friends. Never ever take them for granted. And thank God for bringing them into our lives. Soul, as always, you've done a masterful job!

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Unwritten Soul 05 January 2018

To all one who close to our hearts, nothing is more deserved for them but pure feeling and respect, as much as desire to see them happy and keep marking life with continous success, as this year just started i hope you my friend Richard as well as other friend of mine will make it greater ahead more than what past hold!

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Hazel Durham 25 December 2017

The true meaning of friendship is written so beautifully with the hard times together friends stand strong against the storms of life but to open our eyes to the beauty of the journey with a best friend that nobody can divide!

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Unwritten Soul 05 January 2018

And to ones who appreciate our being! Thanks to you as wellllllllllllll for always stick around :) Have an amazing year Hazel, more smile and greatness will come to you sooner! i am sure you will have it!

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