Time trapped me into its web
Tides swept me into its swirl.
Situation fenced my thoughts and over powered me.
My unbridled thoughts fell into the well of fear
Where turbulent water tested its patience
Finally, I gave up loosing my confidence.
Choosing out of one was difficult......
Either to Live like a dead one
Or to die and live in everyone! ! !
©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014
Great poem and valuable question to find answer possible by a intuitive meditation and thoughts.
Wow! Great flow of thoughts. The most difficult question that has no perfect answer accept what comes from your heart. Thank you for this wonderful poem. Thank you so much for your comments too.
Meditate when complicacies arise. you will get the answer. nice confession through write
Either to Live like a dead one Or to die and live in everyone! ! ! If every one adopts this ideal for living and dying paradise will not be needed any more.
This poem falls on negative aspects of life yet by unloading your feelings you have done the right thing as it empowers you to fight things aright...............Geetha..........a nice composition strongly felt.................
Life is to face the challenges and writings in this poem is sadness and poem is beautiful.
Dear Geetha - why so much in a broken heart? ? May be you're through a leisure time relaxing a bit. Neither you are to Live like a dead one or to die and live in everyone, I'm sure you'll come up again. Don't worry at all. Be in a merry mood.
So true.............the dilemma engraved in these lines......I am grateful to you for not only reading my poems but also rating and giving your valuable comments...THANKS...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Question asked! Answer can be found within...nice expressive poem.