One Must Say Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

One Must Say

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One must say

Friday, April 6,2018
1: 38 PM

One must say
When people are going away
With helplessness on the way
Right man must stand firmly and stay

It is not important
How you seize it instantly
And protest with the words
So effectively in open and onward

It is a powerful weapon
And strikes hard even
For a moment, even crowd withdraws
And makes way or allowed

It is not about your existence
Or at somebody's insistence
It has struck you at once
And you have jumped to take the chance

I have some reservation
And keep observation
If others are not doing right kind of things
Then I also should not try to bring the solution

One Must Say
Friday, April 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Allport 13 April 2018

an inspirational write of what wise words can achieve? ..............wonderfully penned Hasmukh

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Top Of The Tree 13 April 2018

This poet is the world's best. His voluminous poems shows us that he is the best. To top Treasure Island is a significant achievement. This fact is recognised by his compatriot administrators. How wise they are. Such beautiful poetry inspires all others on this site.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 April 2018

Hasmukh, such a great poem of the day... congrats for being chosen....10+++

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Robert Murray Smith 13 April 2018

Congratulations supremo poet. Your poems will be read long after you have entered the kingdom proclaimed by the prophets.

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Thank You Dear User 13 April 2018

This world leading poet should have poem of the day forever. You have almost achieved this dear administrators. He is an example to all of us on how to write perfect poetry. O do we wish to be as perfect.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 April 2018

A poem with perfect observation has been nicely shared. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Lantz Pierre 13 April 2018

I am offended. Poetry, and art in general I believe, should be about making people think, and to show interested persons the world in a fresh and naked way to allow them to reflect on their own behaviors and interpretations of events. This is a sermon from the pulpit of righteous putting forth a line of thought which is intended to preclude thought in the reader. It's a shame that the writer thinks that rhymes are enough to make a sermon into a poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 April 2018

Very nice poem. Enjoyed the message in lines. Thanks for posting and congrats.

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Bill Cantrell 13 April 2018

An awesome poem! The last four lines are the perfect end to this great poem! ! Congratulations for poem of the day!

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Ramesh T A 13 April 2018

Congratulations, my friend!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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