Oneness Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Oneness

Rating: 4.7


Oh lord
How you manage this world?
Thanks to two hands
For touching the life's demands!
Thanks to two eyes
For watching the tears and cries!
Thanks to two feet
For wandering into life's street!
Thanks to two ears
For hearing the final fears!
Oh lord
Tie the oneness cord

(2008/12/17)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zoe Mathias 16 December 2008

Enjoyed this poem :)

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Wow nice flow to this poem.. Great job! ! ! Krista

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Marvin Brato 17 December 2008

P ondering thoughts e nriched prayer r eckon the blessings s owed in mankind i n the hope a t the end n one is left unloved!

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Tsira Goge 17 December 2008

Tie the oneness cord.. .................................. ..Have well told Amir, it is magnificent thought..10.... Tsira

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C. P. Sharma 17 December 2008

Well organised thoughts and well composed poem. Loved it. CP

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M M 19 December 2008

An inspired poem, which makes understand how duplicity is linked to unity, and may come from it. Oneness before division in two. And yet, the 'two' helps to understand the oneness. Like in an infinite circle in which all is one despite the many numerous dots needed to build it if one wants to understand it at our finite level.10

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Raj Nandy 18 December 2008

A beautiful prayer! May the good Lord touch our heart and soul, for a peaceful 2009! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Thad Wilk 17 December 2008

The Lord is beside you he is everywhere, an a oneness is felt from his love that we share.. Wonderful poem an sentiments Shiraz! *10*! Friend Thad

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Great Persian! We must thanks God everyday for everything. Pleaswe comment Sailing in this love.

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Anjali Sinha 17 December 2008

nicely penned anjali

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