Love’s fade,
insipid glade.
labored heave,
flaccid peeve.
Wax precess.
Wane recess.
Dried sheaves.
Scattered leaves.
Stark glance,
looks askance.
Nebulous eyes.
Hidding lies,
Timeless tales.
Careworn wails.
(Islamabad)
i already told you that you have a mastery over couplets...
good 'passion precession' words parade...gives a nice tasty insight...thanks...10
sweet & smart poem, love keeps its momentums, and powers
To convey a message in rhyming is indeed difficult but you seem to master the art, very descriptive and creative write, Saadat!
lovely couplets each a masterpiece as always a tenner for you anjali
Wonderful rhythmic poem, short and terse like. Conical spin of a long cry exhausted in timeless tales of love and pain. Good couplets, Saadat. Regards Naseer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sweet poem and writing