Paths Poem by Shihabudheen K J


Rating: 5.0

My princess!
have you any idea!
which paths i went wrong,
time again and again! only those paths leading to you.

Neela Nath Das 06 November 2012

Aha! wonderful poem Sihas. Your princess is lucky enough.She must be waiting for you too.10+++

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Karen Sinclair 06 November 2012

Thankfully we sometimes take the wrong route only to find a more profound appreciation and deep breaths through more solid steps when we finally know where on earth we are going...lovely in its joy...tyvm karen

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 November 2012

A lovely brisk poem i enjoyd lots. Good job!

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 20 November 2012

Do you think anybody knows where YOU went wrong. Think about it.

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Susan Lacovara 19 September 2014

All paths lead somewhere..some take us away, only to twist and lead us back to places of the heart. A beautiful expression...almost as if thinking outloud! Sweet and pure words. PEACE

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Kaila George 13 April 2014

Simple but effective and to the point...another interesting format of writing...thanks for sharing.

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Kemi Kemms 18 May 2013

No path taken is wrong; everything happens for a reason!

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Jahan Zeb 05 December 2012

Nice style for a nice message delivered from a nice heart to a nice heart. I loved the the way the opinion is sought in this poem. innocently. I length of each line increasing suggest the warmth and the enthusiasm increased in the heart of the poet. Only those paths leading to you. A nice innocent expression of telling every way and manner adopted is only cuz the poet thinks its leading to his beloved. Romantic and nice Shihabudheen

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Chandra Thiagarajan 20 November 2012

A beautiful poem to your princess.Ponder over and find the right path to meet her. Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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