Peace In Equality Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Peace In Equality

Rating: 3.5


I

breathe

through two ways-

"taking and leaving"

equally I do this breathing

inside lung I feel healthy in this equality

satiate must come if I maintain legal equality in earning and expense

happiness and peaceful life lives in indiscriminate allotment of wealth as like as breathing lives in equal taking and giving up


-January 14,2019 Chattogram

Monday, January 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: equality,giving up,peace,taking
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Fibonacci Style: syllabic form- 1+1+2+3+5+8+13+21+34
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 January 2019

Well said.....An insightful piece of work........................10

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Fantastic poem within the limitation of syllable.10/10

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Prabir Gayen 14 January 2019

Very beautiful poem dear friend....

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T Rajan Evol 14 January 2019

Great poem on peace In Equality.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 January 2019

Equality is one of the wings of peace and brings happiness to all. An insightful write cleverly written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 January 2019

World peace! ! Joy in your heart today. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2019

Equality brings peace, a nice idea, a thoughtful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 January 2019

wow wow wow lolo wow what lovely breathing wow okay as one below says WAH WAH WAH JIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 January 2019

Wah, another Fibonacci incorporating the concepts of 'taking and leaving' and 'peace and equality'. These are two aspects of life which is dual in nature. True living is in balancing this dvata, duality. Thanks for sharing.

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