Perceptual Petals Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Perceptual Petals

Rating: 5.0


A nice interpretation can be done,
Getting breeze and fragrance,
Softness attracts attention more,
Light beautifies every petal.

Taking birth in spring's arrival,
Still petals of flowers smile,
Tolerating the hotness of summer,
Still they accept gentle light.

To transfer beauty of humanity,
Through every pollen grain,
These petals gently swing in wind,
Adoring God they pray in deepness.

Life sustains in calmness and joy,
Like these petals if motivated,
Petals of peace reflect wisdom,
Light is ornament of righteousness.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,08, April 2018. All rights reserved.

Perceptual Petals
Sunday, April 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers,perception,wisdom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,01, April 2018. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 08 April 2018

Great poem about perceptual petals.

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Mark Walters 08 April 2018

Thanks is a beautiful tribute to The Light. God is seen in all of His creation, Great read!

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Rus Mer 08 April 2018

Life sustains in calmness and joy, Like these petals if motivated, Petals of peace reflect wisdom, Light is ornament of righteousness... have enjoyed this nice depiction 10

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Valsa George 09 April 2018

In every flower we see the beauty of creation! When their petals swing in the breeze, we feel as if they are dancing in joy over their creation..........! Beautiful poem!

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Mihaela Pirjol 30 April 2018

Wow! .... I love it! .... My same imperial lily (I think that is its name) , just blossomed yesterday! And, I myself had it photographed! The queen of Spring! I love it, and I love your poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2018

Petals of peace! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 April 2018

A fascinating nature write that captures the beauty and magic of flowers. I like the last stanza.Powerful words that inspire and give wisdom. A great piece.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 April 2018

Life sustains in calmness and joy, Wow Sir, beautiful poem on spring that lingers in the petals of flowers. 10+++++++++++ for such magnificence. Subhas

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 April 2018

Life sustains in calmness and joy/Like these petals if motivated.....a beautiful piece of poetry! Loved the sweetness of poetic expression! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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