Point Of Saturation Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Point Of Saturation

Rating: 4.9


Speak up, O mightiest mountain
On the apex extraordinaire
What height you conjure
in your Dreams?

Speak up, O fathomless sea
From your dreaded depth
draped in dead silence
What abyss would
shiver you up
to scream?

Speak up, O scorching sun
born with a burning core
Flamed up in furore
What stream of heat
would suffice
your gleam?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 07 August 2009

the forces of nature and their boundless wonder..well captured in this awe-inspiring write

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Mark Nwagwu 05 August 2009

what heighth you conjure in your dreams - higher, higher, still; that's where your poetry is going, Vaibhav, to the mountain of your dreams. I liked the challenge to vastness

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Shekhar Joshi 04 August 2009

liked it.........excellent one......10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 02 August 2009

True, the point of saturation is beyond one's imagination, that cannot be described in words.

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Mamta Agarwal 01 August 2009

Vaibhav, this is brilliant, rhetorical outburst. there is reverence, a sense of amazement and very powerful imagery. however, there are lessons to be learnt from the mighty mountain, sea and Sun. the whole of nature speaks... 10 Mamta Mamta

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Vidi Writes 07 November 2009

Point of saturation comes to those Who get exhaused with their limited explore Your talk to Mountain, Sea and the might Sun.... They never have any saturation point... Brim to their power and glory.... They forever stand to show and shine. I read your poem as an inspiration To be derived to look at these mighties And learn to hold the exploration level With much varities and unlimited. Love reading it... Great write indeed.

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Seema Aarella 19 August 2009

They are the matchless wonders of nature......as u say saturated to the brim! well concieved and scripted! ...10!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 August 2009

a well conceived concept.10 shan

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Dr Kamran Haider 17 August 2009

Vaibhav my friend, you have the ability to walk the paths beyond the reach of an ordinary soul's ability to tread... you have an extraordinary extended imagination... What a great piece you have shared with us... I am glad I read it... Thank you Regards, Kamran

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Ritty Patnaik 16 August 2009

there is a saturation point for everything, including the human mind.nature too! very well written poem which makes you wonder about the magnitude of natures saturation point.great write. ritty

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