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Rating: 5.0

Sometimes I fear
if pain is walking
footsteps come near..

Wednesday, August 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions
Unwritten Soul 03 August 2016

When the road you are standing now is with bravery, steps never close to you... This is Nice provoking writing from you... Keep writing more

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Yuko Onishi 03 August 2016

lovely composition, i loved the flow of it.

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Valsa George 06 August 2016

Pithy write with a lot of meaning!

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Nosheen Irfan 04 August 2016

A beautifully written succinct gem that a lot of us can relate to. It's a 10 for me.

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Kelly Kurt 03 August 2016

A feeling shared by many. Thank you, Ali Peace

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Mj Lemon 06 August 2018

Fear...that all too constant companion. Too often, I suspect, we simply opt to ignore its presence. A superb poem, with much to think about.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 February 2017

A meaningful poem....................................................

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Susan Williams 01 January 2017

excellent! ! ! I like what you accomplished with a few words- -a very well selected set of words.... gave me a chill- - 10

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Siddartha Montik 05 December 2016

simple truths of Worldly life! thanks for sharing!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 August 2016

A painful truth neatly packaged in a few words. Thank you.

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