Rhythm Of Life! ! ! Poem by Shahzia Batool

Rhythm Of Life! ! !

Rating: 4.3


A mild smile is but a screen
vague and opaque
we find it hard to see through it
the mist of grief
though it persists in purer feel
and harder sense;
Life, in fact is a finer blend
of gloom and glee;
so this harmony in facts of life,
aspects of life
makes it quite liveable and lovable...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lasoaphia Quxazs 11 September 2012

This is the truth. Many people lives that way. When we loose the ego, which can be hurt, see everybody as a child of God, then we can find true happiness ALWAYS.

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Robert Green 10 September 2012

Doom and gloom, happy and sad. A great write

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Saadat Tahir 10 September 2012

Life, in fact is a finer blend of gloom and glee; life again is a canned send of bonds yet free. beautiful poem...sagacious, written with an awareness of the deeper turmoils that the sky spins on Adams progeny. loved it...kudos... :)

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Valerie Dohren 10 September 2012

Life as a blend of gloom and glee is so true - very meaningful write.

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Unwritten Soul 09 September 2012

Just a nice tune that we shall read again, nice write Shahzia_Soul

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Muhammad Ali 30 January 2014

All true, you said in the poem. Aapi, considering our real cause of breathing, the joys and worries become different, and also what we call it Tension.

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Ravi Sathasivam 16 October 2012

Life, in fact is a finer blend of gloom and glee Nice wording. An excellent poem for encouragement and positive think. Tfs

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 15 October 2012

OK, life is 2 sided: up-down, happy-sad, in-out, until you find out who you are, after that just giving thanks, gratefulness, goodness to all, understanding all why they are for what they are. Wishing you the best.

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Vipins Puthooran 16 September 2012

Life, in fact is a finer blend of gloom and glee; Wow! ! ! ! I like this line..... 'tis my life....top marks! ! !

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Walterrean Salley 13 September 2012

Life is a composition, balancing the bitter with the sweet - all things considered. The balance is necessary. For example, it’s good to be able to smile during the bitter times; that’s what gets us through. A good poem for encouragement. : -)

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