Rimpeling Rushes Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Rimpeling Rushes

Rating: 4.3


rimpeling rushes
the painter draws it
with coloured brushes

several coloured taints
his most favourite paints

crimson red
and darkblue dead
you can get

dark blue dead
like young purple
mostly still wet
if he is working like a turtle

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
AD.2403-2021

Wednesday, March 24, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: purple
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 14 April 2021

And purple my favourite...i enjoyed your purple going crimson red snd blue sll are just cool. Congratulations

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 April 2021

Simply Bravo! Congrats Sylvia Check out my member poem of the day on Monday

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Great Admirer 14 April 2021

What a loveliest poem! Most deserving as TMPOTD. Congrats too.Enjioyed much this beautiful Song!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 April 2021

A beautiful poem. Many congratulations! !

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Chinedu Dike 14 April 2021

A beautiful creation nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.

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Richard Wlodarski 14 April 2021

The last stanza brilliantly sums up youth and old age. Love this poem. Congrats, Sylvia on POD!

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Captain Cur 14 April 2021

Congrats on pome of the day, Sylvia. A turtle painting race, lets see who wins the brightest colors, oh! yes, this fabulous poem!

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Kim Barney 14 April 2021

Sylvia, sincerest congratulations on having this poem of yours selected as Member Poem of the day! Moge je vandaag genieten van een geweldige dag!

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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