Round-About Of Time Comments

I think we are all caught within the circle of life, not knowing which course it will take. Great poem CP. Best wishes, Andrew

great write.......time shows us everything and says....you are everything but yet nothing

A wonderful imagery write..very significant...

Absolutely stunning write CPS...who have described perfectly with wonderful imagery too the ups and downs in life.... when one can move from the pinacle of success to the forgotten annals of history with speed. Certainly a 10+++

Excellent theme and imagery with touches of playground equipment. I went up and down and around with you. I had better go now as I am dizzy! Top marks Karin Anderson

that's life a round about of time. impermanence is the only thing constant in life. very rhytmic poem, depicting reality. though it seems some sail through quite smoothly.10 Mamta

flowing with significance... wonderful write...great.. a true write indeed... a wonderful example of wholesome and matured poetry 10+++

A roundabout which happens to everyone some days are diamonds some are stone, a true write thanks for the read....regards

a perfect carousal of times -10 anjali

brilliant write sir.....very thoughtful....I loved it...10

I love your title. It is true that nothing lasts. Both praise and indifference have their day. But the mere joy of being makes it all worthwhile. This is our time to write poetry, C.P. And you do it so well... Always your friend, Sandra

Round about time added to my favourite list.

Time did speak many things. Patience to be inculcated. you have reminded my life by writing time............A masterpiece. My sincere thanks for this particular poem.

an intesreting take on the meandrous pathways of life

Everything works in cycles in life.

C.P. my friend, thank you for this thoughtful poem. I find the beauty of being now in what some would call my senior years, perhaps nearly at the end of time, that time does not really matter, as I have learned to cherish, each moment, then leave each cherished moment, for the next one that arrives. Nothing stays, everything changes, each day our sun rises on a diffferent world. We must just be happy with it all. regards Bob

Every boom should follow a recession A balancing game of time. The same 'Time' when judged with caution Mind can also be balanced to tolerate the pain. Values of life - have an easy say. Round-About of time has its own say. Good read. Thank you.

true adoration is'nt there if it was for a purpose or a use...leave alone adoration even love is lost with a downfall...inspite of all these external emotional calamities a thing within holds us and that seems to be the true companion

People respect only one thing in the world...........POWER.........When you are out of it.........you are thrown out like a waste paper...............People respect the Chair not the person who occupies it............So wise are always humble...............Good Write......

thoughtful piece thanks for sharing