Scroll 2 Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Scroll 2

Rating: 5.0


solitary servant raised her eyes to see
who was walking along Volga river
in the shade of frozen fortress
muted priest read a book of exorcism

with a topaz fountain murmuring in Alta Badia
pots of gardenias perfumed at dawn
the space among red terraces was splendid
for so many forgotten heroes of life

if you had told the lie
not me or that mere listeners
or any one in the carnival
would have adored you
as much as we did

when the clocks struck nine
and crows scream hauntingly
a single flash of lightning
made the nuance frighten

the gala nights in the Amazon woods
were full of compassionate guests
the sharp eyes from their hidden towers
watched that music, dance, and party

(dedicated to a poet friend at poemhunter, Luwi Habte)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 11 October 2009

another masterpiece in the works.

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Noel Horlanda 11 October 2009

well crafted, full of deep thoughts...cheers

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Vinod Kumar 10 October 2009

nice work dear poet, Era`s changed the names as St`Peter`s Berg, Lenin Gard etc. etc, The river is same to offered the surviving facillities for everyone, to celeberate, thanks.

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Obinna Eruchie 09 October 2009

A very beautiful innovative tribute to a friend, its words are enchanting.

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Christina Phan 09 October 2009

inspiration poem and another fanastic job 10++ your poems are so amazing keep writing gd one

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 November 2009

a precious dedication to Luwi/

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Catrina Heart 22 October 2009

Stupendous poetry written my dear......well done! ! !

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Anthony Foster 21 October 2009

A solitary servant as the witness, a party and compasionate guests. Such poetry love it.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 October 2009

Another great poem Ahmad.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 October 2009

'if you had told the lie not me or that mere listeners or any one in the carnival would have adored you as much as we did' wow!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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