She Said... Poem by Esther Leclerc

She Said...

Rating: 4.7


She quietly said, 'Milton... I love you.'
His light heart ballooned to the moon.
She flew out - - 'So shy! ' he thought, but he knew
That wedding bells would clanggg very soon.

Long had he worshipped and followed her,
Sent her lingerie and flowers.
At long last his ardor had paid off
for ere long (drool) her clothes she'd doff!

Milton suffers a personal weakness:
Quite certain he knows false from true.
But to his wretched horror and bleakness,
He found out she'd said, 'I love Hugh'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 30 October 2006

Esther the jester strikes again... very hu(gh) morous! ! Brian

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R H 28 October 2006

Esther, your wonderful humour abounds - simply superb! Grinning...Justine :)

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Alison Cassidy 27 October 2006

Esther, this is superb. Talk about slapstick! Brilliant punch line. Poor old Milton. Silly twisted boy. 'His light heart ballooned to the moon' is exquisite! love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Danny Reynolds 25 October 2006

Hugh must be Joe King? ; ¬) Danny

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Uriah Hamilton 24 October 2006

Ha, ha, poor Milton! ! !

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Robert E Hann 07 February 2007

You know, ...I think that happened once...to ME! ! HAHA...love it anyway. Robert

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Utterly hilariously wonderful! A shining juxtaposition of soaring emotion and watching it all come down (so to speak) .... t x

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Scarlett Treat 01 November 2006

This was just hysterically funny...poor Milty! Lucky ' Hugh' (for writing such a funny poem!)

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Will Barber 31 October 2006

Brilliant, just brilliant!

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M S 30 October 2006

nice twist, you really had me going there... i wonder what was the inspiration. cheers, masha

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