She quietly said, 'Milton... I love you.'
His light heart ballooned to the moon.
She flew out - - 'So shy! ' he thought, but he knew
That wedding bells would clanggg very soon.
Long had he worshipped and followed her,
Sent her lingerie and flowers.
At long last his ardor had paid off
for ere long (drool) her clothes she'd doff!
Milton suffers a personal weakness:
Quite certain he knows false from true.
But to his wretched horror and bleakness,
He found out she'd said, 'I love Hugh'.
Esther, your wonderful humour abounds - simply superb! Grinning...Justine :)
Esther, this is superb. Talk about slapstick! Brilliant punch line. Poor old Milton. Silly twisted boy. 'His light heart ballooned to the moon' is exquisite! love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
You know, ...I think that happened once...to ME! ! HAHA...love it anyway. Robert
Utterly hilariously wonderful! A shining juxtaposition of soaring emotion and watching it all come down (so to speak) .... t x
This was just hysterically funny...poor Milty! Lucky ' Hugh' (for writing such a funny poem!)
nice twist, you really had me going there... i wonder what was the inspiration. cheers, masha
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Esther the jester strikes again... very hu(gh) morous! ! Brian