Dave Alan Walker

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Sleep Safe - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Sleep safe
without any nightmares
or any fears
sleep safe

When you wake
in the morning
they'll be no more dark
just sunlight in your eyes

You don't need
to be scared of the dark
any more
because mummy's going to love you
even more

If you ever get scared
at night
look out of the window
at the cold moonlight

You see
it's not even dark
at all

So sleep safe
without any nightmares
or any fears
sleep safe

Because nothings going to hurt you any more
child in the night
close your eyes and sleep
nothings going to hurt you any more

Comments about Sleep Safe by Dave Alan Walker

  • (10/5/2012 6:38:00 PM)

    A tender and consoling piece, very nice indeed. (Report) Reply

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  • Miroslava Odalovic (1/28/2012 12:38:00 PM)

    I like this poem overall, but especially 'sleep safe' repetition which makes it really soothing. Your poetry is that of compassion. You're a man of compassion. I am glad you let yourself be discovered. (Report) Reply

  • (1/19/2012 9:13:00 AM)

    Brotha', I've only read a few of your poems & I must say that in some way or another, I can relate. I'm going to make a point to read all of your work! I think u are extremely talented. Keep writting bout your life experiences because (like many of us) you've got a story to tell! ! (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2011 7:36:00 AM)

    Hi Dave..first..I would like to say thank u for ur nice comment in my poem November Rain.. :) ...and for your poem Sleep Safe..you really did a great job! ! ..nice poem.. :) .. (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (9/23/2011 6:19:00 AM)

    a safe sleep will always be a prize for a child
    i see innocence and peace.your poem is nice.
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  • (9/21/2011 1:56:00 PM)

    Its a good job done i liove that its like ur telling me a story (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/16/2011 3:22:00 PM)

    So soothing and caring a message.....a nocturnal flying sleep as it would be..well written and the way of saying it.. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (9/15/2011 4:06:00 PM)

    A soft lullaby.. Very beautiful.. Nice work.. (Report) Reply

  • (9/14/2011 6:44:00 PM)

    This is beautiful, a little repetitive but all and all its sweet (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (9/14/2011 12:05:00 PM)

    Beautiful filling inside the feeling here...shelter the night with rest of calmness...
    'Child in the night...nothing hurt you anymore' sounds like a child stop thinking about the fears when it lost in a dream...by the voice of calming..Like it, finally poem hunter let me comment on this.. :) _Unwritten SOul
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  • (9/14/2011 9:29:00 AM)

    beautiful, sweet words. (Report) Reply

  • (9/13/2011 6:25:00 PM)

    a beautiful way to end the day! (Report) Reply

  • Juan Olivarez (9/12/2011 7:18:00 PM)

    Great poem, surely and it's a comfort to any child that hears it. I agree with Claudia, however I don't stutter like her. (Report) Reply

  • Claudia Krizay (9/12/2011 5:41:00 PM)

    A very moving poem that I can identify with. Well expressed, well done-good job! (Report) Reply

  • Claudia Krizay (9/12/2011 5:40:00 PM)

    A very moving poem that I can identify with. Well expressed, well done-good job! (Report) Reply

  • (9/12/2011 3:40:00 PM)

    A very beautiful and poetic lullaby. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (9/12/2011 8:42:00 AM)

    sweet moving poem, Dave. Well done (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, September 12, 2011

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