So Lucky Poem by Lyn Paul

A thoughtful poem and poet's notes

Saying goodbye should not be all sadness. Nice touch.

A very self motivating and self inspiring poem. Thank you dear Lyn.

This is very moving....Indeed, just being a survivor can be the greatest of all victories....and ought to make one feel so lucky.

Marvellous expressioon. Stunning and impressive poem with Poet's Note I like most. Thanks for sharing......10

i reading it; keep your pants on! The bodies mechanics May be failing Though heavy tuning .................maybe body's? and what is heavy tuning? could it be 'turning'. ? ? life is ok for me, but i hope death is even better! does Hell have Internet? ? ? you seem to have pleased readers, and i am NOT displeased! i am glad you are/feel Lucky. i hope you always feel that way, even in death. or don't you plan to die? i can just picture you inside the flowery coffin, thinking: Did i turn off the light in the bathroom? and then thinking: Lucky me, again. i am NOT the one who will have to pay the next electric bill. let me know if bodies is a typo and if you want it changed by me before i put this into August's showcase. well, i'll put it in and it can be edited later; it is up to you. not a big deal; i understood the poem i believe. to MyPoemList also. Thanks. bri :) favorite lines: I've polished many coffins Smiled and said goodbye Walked gracefully with the music.................i've heard of mourners touching coffins, but i never heard of one polishing a coffin!

Freedom! ! To be alive. Nice work.

Thank you so much for this optimistic hymn to life! and such an inspiring picture! picture is so nice thet it makes think that we may be lucky after death too, if to believe in afterlife! To be forever grateful Just to be alive Healthy and free Spared to be So Lucky

When we are confronted by adversities, think of the umpteen blessings we have each day! We are alive to see another morn! We are healthy and not disabled! Though windows were open, they got slammed shut! But again they will open for us! Though tears were shed, smile will again alight on our lips! This is the right spirit Lyn! Nothing should let us get discouraged! Great write and highly inspirational!

Very moving write Lyn, you explore the bad times but really your spirit of natural joy makes your world a happy and positive place to grow and be thankful!