Abdulrazak Aralimatti


Sonnet 2 Flow Of Thoughts - Poem by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

Thoughts that flow through the id,
Wander with an immoral ride,
Such thoughts should get rid,
The one that don't abide.
Thoughts that are virtuous and right,
Make actions and deeds noble,
Our future brilliant and bright,
And the vice thin and feeble.

Let thoughts flow through superego,
And capture the roots of morality,
Let thoughts through conscience flow,
To know its self and reality.
If such then, will be a true gain,
In a memoir to write and retain.

Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual


Comments about Sonnet 2 Flow Of Thoughts by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

  • Agatha Eliza (5/5/2016 12:58:00 PM)


    Counscience as a railway of thoughts...the ones that are harmful and detrimental, the wordly concerns and vice must be relinquished, and replaced by thoughts that generate virtuousness, goodness and spirituality, so the human being to achieve purity and nobility.10 +++ (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/16/2016 11:17:00 AM)


    Positive thoughts to overcome evil works. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/5/2015 7:38:00 AM)


    Marvellous speculation and depiction. The favourite lines are.......Let thoughts flow through superego,
    And capture the roots of morality,
    Let thoughts through conscience flow,
    To know its self and reality.....Thanks for sharing...10
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/26/2015 7:51:00 PM)


    A very thoughtful sonnet, wisely written. 10+++
    Thoughts that are virtuous and right,
    Make actions and deeds noble,
    Our future brilliant and bright,
    And the vice thin and feeble.
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  • Terry Craddock (9/15/2015 11:01:00 PM)


    Nice take on the id and superego, somewhere I also have written about the ego, id and superego; so pleased to find another take on the philosophy of these ideals. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (4/2/2015 6:37:00 AM)


    Beautiful lines......

    Let thoughts flow through superego,
    And capture the roots of morality,
    Let thoughts through conscience flow,
    To know its self and reality.

    Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.
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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/18/2015 3:00:00 AM)


    Glory to be Allah thought is the soul of mind we must make it holy..thank you (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/17/2015 11:13:00 PM)


    Let thoughts flow through superego,
    It's simply amazing..........................10
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    Abdulrazak Aralimatti Abdulrazak Aralimatti (3/17/2015 11:52:00 PM)

    Thanks a lot, JazakAllah, Your comment is a great source of inspiration.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 17, 2015



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