I stood speechless in front of you.
There was so much to say, so much to do
But i just stood speechless in front of you.
Though you sat in front of me, i still kept dreaming about you,
And i just stood speechless in front of you.
I wanted to remind you about the days spent together,
And the songs which impressed each other.
But i just stood speechless in front of you.
When you were about to start;
There was a blast in my heart.
Not knowing how to stop you;
My lips said good bye to you.
You were so caught in the feeling not to say anything for your lips were bound by its force. Nice words!
The immersion of the individual self in love is very well portrayed.
more than wonderful.. i think all lovers stand speechless infront of the one they love...anyways well done and thnx for sharing :)
I like this one sweet words and sweet thoughts keep it up i give you 10
a wonderful piece.... good decision at the end.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Elsee Angel - So often the unspoken word speaks louder than the spoken. Sometimes our dreams are more real than reality. All relationships leave us with indelible memories of PLACES - SPECIAL DAYS and espeially of SONGS. A time of parting is mega difficult and we can't always verbilize what we ant to say at the moment of parting -our lips mouth the words but the parting is silent. This is something we have all experienced 'Too sad for words' but as time goes on the bad memories fade (trust me on this!) and we only remember the good times. A very emotive poem Elsee - well done TEN. Love you in Poetry - JOHN.