Far into the night
My dream comes alive
I burst into bloom
When I remember your smile
The gray sky turns bright
There's a reason to be alive
The stars shine with a mystical fire
I'm thirsty for a drop of life
Step by step, word by word
I come closer to you, merging
Into the eternity of your smile
Never to depart, never to stray.
Nosheen Irfan © 2016
Superb poem, I wish this smile remains on your and everyone's lips and we all greet each other with it. Lovely poem, so refreshing and motivating. Loved it..10++++
In a few lines, you have so powerfully conveyed the strength and fullness.... someone's smile whom you adore in life would be giving you! I too hope, one day he will realize how much you treasure his smile and reserve it for you! Beautiful sentiments, so sweetly expressed!
I'm thirsty for a drop of life Step by step, word by word I come closer to you, merging Into the eternity of your smile Never to depart, never to stray. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The smile you treasure in your heart, the smile that gives you strength and now step by step you become that smile.- - - - -A lovely write, thanks for sharing.
A magnificent poem. Liked the sweet comment of poetess Aarzoo. Top score.
Love! Magical, world-changing, charming love. It sets your body on fire and your heart to smiling a smile you cannot contain. Such a lovely write and it captures that essence of love so well, my dear Nosheen. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
What a pleasing, charming poem. A smile of recognition between two people who love each other is priceless. I also love the line, Thirsty for a drop of life.. When feelings are so ecstatic, that is when words like eternity and never come into the writing. Thanks for sharing. :)
very nice poem, and what if I think it as Sufiana, for Him, Eternal.
Someone who is significant in our life when smiles everything all around smiles.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Let the smile fill your life with eternal peace and love. Beautiful thought well describes in beautiful words. It captures readers attention. bless you Nosheen.10++++ for lifting our spirits with awesome thoughts.