Squeaky Armour Poem by Ranjit Ravindran

Squeaky Armour

Rating: 5.0

Shoes with whistle, I still remember,
Guarded my feet like a squeaking armour;
Every step applauds with squeaks,
And showered kisses on the cheeks.

26 DEC 2009, 2006 Hrs

This is in response to Joy(Haiku) , by Ms. Mamta Agarwal. This haiku made me remember how I ran across the streets wearing a pair of whistling shoes, how the squeaks attracted attention of the onlookers who planted kissess on my chubby cheeks.

Thank you Ma'am for raking up my sweet childhood memories.

Nalini Hebbar 27 December 2009

very nice...these shoes are a big hit with kids and their parents...great walk down the memory lane

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Mamta Agarwal 27 December 2009

Ranjit, am so happy the haiku brought back joyous memories of childhood. you capture and relive your joy with good imagery. Happy new year Mamta

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Pradyumna Jyotir 14 January 2010

The poem is very sweet. It brought back memories of my childhood...when life was so carefree and joyous

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Marilyn Lott 09 January 2010

What sweet thoughts of an adorable little boy. Our memories are special treasures, especially of a happy childhood. '10! ' for you Ranjit. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Indira Renganathan 09 January 2010

Why no new poems? ......

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Diane Violet 31 December 2009

a very sweet memory and write

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Indira Renganathan 30 December 2009

Childhood flavour down the memory lane is ever significant...yours is no exemption...nice write indeed

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