Streets Of The Pen Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Streets Of The Pen

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In the streets of the pen, poems are scattered
Some of the poems I can greet
Some of the poems I can feed
In the streets of the pen, poems are scattered

Some of the poems I can greet
From the mountain of immortal love
Where flying the happiest white dove
Some of the poems I can greet

From the mountain of immortal love
The poems come like an endless stream of fountain
There all verses feel happy artlessly the poetic brain
From the mountain of immortal love

The poems come like an endless stream of fountain
Where the love and dream live together
Where the heart makes a heaven of care
The poems come like an endless stream of fountain

Where the love and dream live together
There the poetic world paints a peaceful canvas
There, truth implores the righteous law onrush
Where the love and dream live together

There the poetic world paints a peaceful canvas
Where the poems help to teach me truly
Where I want to live spontaneously
There the poetic world paints a peaceful canvas

Where the poems help to teach me truly
In the streets of the pen, poems are scattered
In the thoughtful wisdom, lies are shattered
Where the poems help to teach me truly

In the streets of the pen, poems are scattered
Some of the poems I can greet
Some of the poems I can feed
In the streets of the pen, poems are scattered


-21.12.2020 Chattogram

Tuesday, December 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: how i feel,poetry,writings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is Catena Rondo (a pattern of poem)

The poem is comprised of a variable number of quatrains
Each quatrain has a rhyme pattern of AbbA
The first line of each quatrain is also the final line of the quatrain
The second line of each quatrain is the first line of the next quatrain
The final quatrain should repeat the first quatrain word for word

There are no rules for meter, syllables, or subject matter. Just a lot of rhyming refrains.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 22 December 2020

" In the streets of the pen poems are scattered, In the thoughtful wisdom lies are shattered." Wonderful and innovative theme as also the form. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing a 5 star conceptualization.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 December 2020

Amazing Poem dear Mahtab! Again, i learn a new pattern of rhyming - Catena Rondo. Lively, rhythmic and joyful refrains, indeed! Goes into my PoemList. Thank you so much Mahtab.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 December 2020

Some of the poems I can greet/From the mountain of immortal love....sweet poetic expression. A beautiful poem....extremely well composed....Top marks!

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Mountain of immortal love...Amazing indeed! Top stars

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 December 2020

In the streets of pen is where the poet finds solace to gather all those scattered words. Keep roaming and jeep sharing Mahtab.

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Kostas Lagos 24 December 2020

Absolutely amazing! Perfectly written!

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Varsha M 23 December 2020

This a beautiful style. You have executed it brilliantly carrying us to the street of pen.... gathering human brain to press it on the pages of heaven reflecting the true essence it carried until life is made complete. Nice to see new style.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 December 2020

good one which streets have seen ur pen and thanks for so many punny comments on my penny pen poems my poetic friend

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